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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Hello Brenda. Mesmerizing piece of melancholy poetry. I can feel your pain and sadness. Your heart will find happiness with your new surroundings. All in time. xo
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Bravo.. Excellent presentation, Fia. Poetry will never die, with so many great writers keeping it alive. Besides, I’m not qualified to do anything else. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Very true! Like all forms of art…it evolves! Painting, music and POETRY! It desires a response. You may try to evoke one feeling and end up being perceived entirely different! You are great. Poetry will never die! Like love it will be in a multitude of forms.
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hello beautiful Willow this was a twist I didn’t know where you were going it’s very clever and relateable I had to clean my dad’s grandfather clock when naughty 💕
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Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Amazing storytelling my friend, I can relate. Not that I got in trouble a lot, but when I did, not a fun time by any means of the imagination. Excellent work, as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love “old timey” pieces. It brings back the good ol days, even if we didn’t know that they were, then. I would’ve preferred the chair over the usual ass whuppin.
But eh, I survived.
It’s always interesting to me how others lived and dealt with their own upbringings. This was a wonderful story indeed. I raised my kids on “time out” instead of spankings, as your story reflects. It’s a better choice.
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Don’t get too cozy in the “old timey” corner. I’m all over the map these days. Who knows where it will take me next?
Yeah, my girl was raised on time out too. Little rascal knew exactly when she was about to land there too. Look me right in the eye & say “I go to time out now?” Good kid…that girl gave me side aches holding in the laughter.
Thank you for the visit. Good to see you roaming the new halls
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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The light only blinds and befuddles us, while darkness softly and thoroughly embraces our truth, regardless. There is indeed something special about nothingness -the void- where everything and nothing is possible.
Superb write, my friend!
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Always layers in your writes my friend, this one does as well. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian