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Just beautiful…
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hi Pete thanks for looking. Glad you liked❤️
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I don’t think they get any sweeter than you Damian. I appreciate you too.❤️
Jackie
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Intriguing work.
It feels as if it’s going somewhere beyond the cafe.
I enjoyed it.
Regards
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Hi James 🙂
Yeah, they have the new three word challenge 🙂 took me a minute to figure out how to do it like how to submit it lol glad you liked it. Always a pleasure to see you my friend.
Jackie ❤️
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I loved this so incredibly much my friend. The intensity of passion and her sorrow and then the stranger named compassion taking her in his heart just touched mine deeply. I am moved and touched.
John
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Yeah, they have the three world challenge here, John, so I thought I’d give it a try. I didn’t get any traction but that’s OK. I did enjoy how this came out too. Always a pleasure to see you on my page my friend. Love you, bro❤️
your sis, Jackie.❤️
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You brought up some amazing points in this. We are aĺ human, doing human things. Even our avoidance we are slightly similar. Like this poem very much.
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Thanks Fia….
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hello dearest Benny I wonder if we don’t manifest in more than one place…I like occupying a body but it is uncomfortable but it allows so much for us to interact with each other enjoy our surroundings and eat…someday our souls may return to spirit I don’t know this is deep 💕
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When we can finally let go of everything, including our ego, then we will be free.
Unfortunately, that usually requires the death of our body or a life time of training the mind…..lol
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Read MoreIn the waking hours eyes still shut half mind lost half mind present that's the time they arrive there's an opening that must be exploited the goblins enter,with weird memories and imaginations sowing salt on fertile ground I could lie there all day in this strange middle earth contemplating disaster but...
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hello dearest Benny mine come and go throughout the day I ask my Father to be kind to me and not let those things happen great write 💕
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Persistent little buggers those Goblins…thanks for commenting.
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Yes indeed.
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Oh there is an opening that must be exploited. Hmm nice line and very interesting poem. Goblins.
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Thanks for commenting Fia.
Goblins are different from gobbling….lol
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Tremendous.
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Very good ink
Bat
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Read MoreAfter she hired a Professional landscaperto come in and make her fairgrounds hospitableHe still denied her a face-to-face meeting with the bearded ladyOnly to then have the nerve to requestshe play with his super-soakerupon demand…Jsyk, the bearded lady, the...
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this is very sexy and clever 💕
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It’s hilarious is what it is so good to see you Crim❤️🌹 Love you girl more than you think.
Always, your sister, Jackie❤️
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Cleverly penned, Jackie. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian! Glad you enjoyed this silly little piece of metaphors. They are truths to some degree lmao!😂
I enjoy seeing you on my page thank you, brother
Jackie 👍🏻❤️
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I love how you had to clear that up. Very funny. Nice piece here.
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Fia❤️
It’s really nice to see you on my page today,
I hope life has been kind to you. Sorry I haven’t been around much.
Love Your Sister
Jackie 🌹
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Thank you, my darling. I like making these kind of funny little zingers. It’s a series actually I have another one. I’m gonna post later. I’ve only gotten to one and two though it’s a work in progress. It’s always wonderful to see you on my page Adira❤️❤️🌹
Your sister, Jackie❤️
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It’s for the three word competition. I hope I did it right thanks for looking Adira. Love you girl.❤️