“where your eyes almost met my soul so many great lines here I can feel your pain lovely lady hugs 💕

Powerfully penned, Jackie. Pulls at my heartstrings, amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

A very intense piece.

So much brooding. I hear you.

Regards
James

Quite beautiful. Love always takes work, but perhaps not so much.
Touching words dear.

This whole thing speaks the truth. That last stanza is spot on Peter.;))

Peter that is good. Where do we go? A glimpse of the light.

I shoot up into the clouds like a rocket! Of course it rains…lol.

this made me smile dearest Benny great write 💕

I enjoyed the playful, lightly sinister nature of this. Admittedly, no.. I didn’t see that couplet coming lol.

No one in their right or indeed write mind wants to feel down or depressed .. I found this post/poem very much to my liking indeed it was compelling .. Kind regards, Neville

When you’ve been there, you know

Peter, this touched my heart. Suffering is used to refine and strengthen us, much like a blacksmith uses a furnace to refine precious metals. Stay strong. 🌹🌾🕊️

I’ve had my share of dark thoughts. I don’t want to go back to that place. One can only hope the future is better.