Love this… great job… excellent flow… great authenticity…

We are more than our physical bodies.

There’s something very “Dr. Spock” about this. Logical. Pure Energy.
That’s some deep thinking, Peter. I’m heading into orbit.

I don’t want to be wiping away your smile, girl.
Thanks for checking this out

Different face, different smile from Adira but same effect.
There’s a few ladies on this site that I’d crawl naked over cut glass just to spend some time with….your one of them.

Dark and engaging . Nice spill

Powerfully penned, DK. This is an incredible write with stellar imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You are too sweet, girl!

When I was young, there were two kids that drowned in the pond across the street… brothers.
Thanks for reading, Keith

I will never forget it. Everyone on my street held hands and made a human chain as they walked across the pond. Unreal.

Deeply felt. Tragic yet majestic at the same time

Much respect

Naaj

I lost a little brother….🙏

So, this one hits especially close to home, Meg.
Beautifully rendered Free Verse, with all the poetic attributes that make this form so expressively powerful to read and vividly sink one’s mind, heart, emotions, and soul into.

No one speaks with a poetic voice like yours!
Thank you ever-so warmly for YOU! ⁓ Richard🖌

You’re a wonderful person, Meg. And an outstanding writer. I love your stories and poetry. Expert at writing erotica and by your picture you’re gorgeous. I don’t judge nor would I here. Sorry, I saw this post had no comments and you spilled alot out. Keep doing what you’re doing, Meg.

Danny boy

You write your feelings at that moment so well that I can feel as if I am in your place.

I am so glad you think so, Keith. Thanks for reading my story!

Excellent work. You bring it to life. Tremendous work. Stay hard at it. I appreciate you.

Meg, you take me along with you into the scene as I read. It is as if I were there seeing it all, hiding in a corner. Truly exquisite prose artist you are. Your narrative grips me as I read. I can feel it all through your crystal clear writing. You are truly talented. I am a really enjoying these. The ending here has me on the edge of my seat. I can’t wait t read more of this story.

John

Great write and surprising end.You do have nice fantasies.
Any reason you chose DampKitten as your nom de plume ?

A BDSM story in verse! My favorite genre!

I’ve got a belt like that
Ironically it never holds my pants up
Book her
I’ll be there soon to interrogate

BAD UNCLE LIKE

Occasionally, I get into some extremely rough writing. You might be pleased to know that I date a female dom who works at my clinic and is an expert in mixed martial arts. (Yes, I’m married. My hubby knows all about it.) She likes to use me as practice material, and I love for her to beat the shit out of me. My husband watches. It makes him hard. I actually follow her to competitive MMA matches for amateurs, and it turns me on massively to watch her kick another girl’s ass in the ring. She often fucks me in the parking lot between matches and leaves me a mess in the back of my jeep, sometimes rolling down the windows so people can easily look inside. She once placed all my clothes on the hood, so I had to go outside naked to retrieve them.

Bring it down here, baby.
Ashley isn’t going to put me at risk to be arrested… but she does some risky shit. She’s not opposed to showing me off as her bitch. I’m not opposed to being owned and a little abused. Nothing facial. She stripes my ass not infrequently.

I don’t know who’s storytelling is naughtier hehe 😉 again, great write.

Don’t lose that ass, Mary. It’s my wonderland.

I can make it juicier