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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Atmospheric Compression
sleep…
we parted company…for the most part
a while ago
snatches of nap here and there
but a full night’s sleep?
…very rare
disrupted by dreams and thoughts
as I stare at the ceiling
and tossmaybe it’s only my imagination
(but I somehow doubt it)
the world feels…
heavier?
more dense?
and…Read More2 Comments-
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No way at all for us to live. Thank you, Curt
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Seagulls
The cry of seagulls
Has me longing to return
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Nailed it in such few words😘
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Thank you Peter😊
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Well written! I should try these more.
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Thank you M.E. yes try it
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I’ve never tried this!
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Im not that good at it but I wanted to try it.
Remember syllable have to be 5-7-5😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Pretty cool. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thanks Damian 😊
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I remember seeing gulls in a Costco parking lot in Denver once and being surprised. A long way from the ocean, they were. I wonder if they ever missed the silence of the sea. Great haiku…I can’t seem to get the hand of writing them myself
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Sometimes you see you did mistake the last moment and its too late to make vows you will be to stand on word. We never realise until the last moment. But in that case i am fortunate because I never got lose of people I got second chance to be with them more than I can destined. So also i never lose people when they miss me I do care more than me.
Jessy Jacob ❤️
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Oh so true Usha. Thanks for the feedback & comments.
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Totally wrecked. Thanks my friend.
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Curve balls, sliders, fast balls. There all coming everyone’s way…Look out! Thanks Damian.
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I think your poem speaks to something very true Willow. There is a definite compression in the air in these times (and for many for a very long time before this). But especially today, there is the feel of the walls pressing in, everything is hunkering down trying to find a safe place to live in. This is no way for human beings to live. -Curt