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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) posted in the group National Poetry Month
April 5th, Ghostships Drift Through the Mind
On the 5th,
the myth of the ghostships returns
adrift,
unhurried,
moving with the slow authority
of things that have forgotten
what it means to have a destination.They glide across the inner horizon,
full of voids and echoes
from the beginnings of time,
carrying the dust of ancient…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Thank you, Neruda is one of my favourite poets, Fernando Pessoa and Florbela Espanca are my top influences.
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Read MoreAuthor’s Note:Inspired by “The Call To Adventure”, by JoshBond. To me, the underlying message is to do freedom responsibly. For me, this involves a mindfulness of both the internal and the external. In this poem, Josh incorporates subtle, irregular...
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You had a full poem and you broke it up to have omitted pieces. Interesting concept
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Read MoreIN THE REALM OF EROTICA We dive into the realm of erotica where passion and desire never cease where words dance naked in front of us and our bodies yearn to be released We explore every inch of each other In the depths of our souls...
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Chère L.,
Yes yes yes, amen to that.
It confirms our attraction to each other, our love, our being human, everything and than some.
And you wrote it in the best possible way.
I love it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus-
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Thank you 😊 I’m glad you like it.
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Standing up applauding this. I agree whole heartily. Bravo
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Thank you 😊
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Beautifully penned, Lizz. Such a passionate write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The physical is 10%, but the real satisfaction is the 90% mental connection.
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The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.
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hello dearest Brandon good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you like it ❤️
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This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow thank you lovely one I appreciate you thoughts these just uncurrents of feeling rising ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Read MoreSometimes I don’t write for beauty. I write because if I don’t, I’ll drown in silence. These words—they’re the only air I got left. So if you read me… just know— This ink’s my heartbeat. For years, I’ve written without pause— sometimes with tears, sometimes with...
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To cool and it’s relatable to all that write, tight
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Thank you 😊
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Chère L.,
Beauty.
The Chinese version:
Beauty in the woods, where no one can hear it, is still beautifulThe greater Amsterdam version:
Beauty which is shared with other people, growsIt’s almost akin to:
Sometimes giving away makes me richer.
All this and more you gave us with this wonderful post.If you’re American: Thank you very much
In all other cases: (please) keep on keeping on (Curtis Mayfield)
Kind regards, Gus-
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Thank you 😊 and no I’m Canadian
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Powerfully penned, Lizz. Excellent write nicely transformed into lyrics my friend. It’s the little differences between the two that gives them each their own personality, while mirroring each other’s point in substance. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks 😊
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Pretty cool poem, PAR. As I read, I felt some of the verses had the feel of a Pablo Neruda texture. April 5th is here and the poetry is honestly flowing. -Curt