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thank you graciously dearest Damian good morning ❤️
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This poem is a vivid, honest look at desire – full of passion but also quiet vulnerability. The contrast between the “neon God” and “bluebirds” is striking and memorable.
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thank you graciously lovely poetess ❤️
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I feel these words. They are otherworldly, uttered from another world beyond the one we inhabit.
Kind regards
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thank you graciously dearest James what a beautiful thought ❤️
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Read MoreIn the nighta half-light came -bearing offerings:some kissed by fire,others raw,still waiting for flame.She placed them before meand slipped awayinto another chamber.The door swallowed her -but when I touched itthe lock surrendered.The scene dissolved.Young ones appeared,long shadowed by confusion.We...
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Yikes. The ambivalence of this is where good literature should lead one. Your typing fingers fall as effortlessly as snow onto the keyboard.
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Thank you so much, Ghosteen. I’m glad the poem gave you that sense of ambivalence; that’s exactly what I was hoping to convey. You have a beautiful way with words, and I truly appreciate your insight.
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A surrealistic journey of assurance and faith. I like it.
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Thank you, Tim. I can’t think of a better way to put it. “A surrealistic journey of assurance and faith” truly captures the feeling I had when I wrote it. I’m glad that came through.
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hello dearest poet I love the message you received it is beautifully written ❤️
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Dearest Crimsin,
Thank you. That’s very kind of you to say. I do feel the message in this dream so strongly. It brought a lot of comfort, especially since it touched on something that had been troubling me for a while.It’s a powerful feeling to know there’s a force or even a divine intervention that will be our advocate, even if we’re not there to witness it.
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Beautifully penned, Roma. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much, Damian. I really appreciate you taking the time to read it and for your kind words. It means a lot.
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Sweet Sisters
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Thank you so much, Jim. “Sweet Sisters” means everything, as the poem is indeed rooted in the unseen bonds and protective love between us.
I’m truly happy to hear it resonates with so many readers. I think at its core, the message of trusting your inner-light is something we all need to carry. I appreciate your kind words! -
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Trippy, peaceful, cosmic. A magical journey here. Nicely executed.
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I appreciate that! This poem began as a strange, trippy dream that stuck with me, so I’m glad it translated into a magical journey for you. It was a release to write it, and I ultimately found meaning and comfort in it -a message about trusting our inner-light and finding peace.
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IDK, the world doesn’t care about any of us. It just keep rolling along. Don’t you think it is up to us to care about feelings? About the feelings of others, about how we relate to the world, all life, and the people who inhabit it? In this sense, you are not a “glitch” but an integral part of everything around you.
I realize this is one part of a larger story (Chapter 17) and I have not as yet read all the chapters, so my comment may be way off base. If so forgive me. But I personally think we all are like stones cast on calm water and the ripples we leave affect the world around us. So, we are all “glitches”. Besides, Amethyste as a crystal is a warm calming stone so those feelings may be some warmth cast into this cold, cold, cold world.
Thanks for your chapter, hope I didn’t over step.
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Only a human cares about other human feelings. We make our own distracted universe. But it is isolated.
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Read MoreI was never broken and I didn’t really believe itbut damn, I got tired of hearing that “there was nothing wrong”with how I was
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We are made the way we are supposed to be. I understand though
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I get it beautiful poetess if they didn’t think that there would be no reason for constant reinforcement reminds me of me with my schizophrenia great write just be you you can’t be anyone else ❤️
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That’s kind of weird isn’t it. It’s like they’re trying to convince you of something before you ask. lol
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Powerful and poignant.
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We are born into circumstances. You control how those circumstances affect you. They may burden you. They may show you the right path for
you. Some people live a glorious life while others struggle to survive. So far, I have survived! I have been broken and I have pieced myself back together. I have taken many wrong roads. I have been very lost at times. Be yourself always.
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian