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Read MoreI am slowly going through this phaseWhere I'm lost in a crazy mazeDaydreaming riddled dreams of rageCan I escape this locked in cageDisheveled chaos filled my mindReality I left behindFollowing blind leading the blindMy minds confusion by designShadowed shadows...
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Thank you..I am glad u enjoyed the layers
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Read More"farcical bloomery" In the meadow of impossible mornings, the daisies exhale in a trumpet’s blush, petals fluttering like embarrassed fans as the air fills with laughter disguised as wind. Rosehip hiccups, clouds of lavender smoke, their thorns rattling like spoons in a drawer. Lilies bow low,...
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Powerfully penned, Kesner. Crisp and precise imagery, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Many thanks, Damian. Means a lot. 🕊️🙏
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Lovely description. Enjoyed the vision you created.
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Many thanks, voi. Made my day 🙏🕊️
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Oh, I wish for just one hour to play as a child in your impossible meadow, or just five minutes as the old man I am; what a wonder that would be! But I will take this one out on occasion and play with it here in my head a while when troubling times require some canny lift-me-up. Yes, this will do nicely, but there’s always room for more. Thank you fredd; I’m still smiling, and I know it will grace my face several times tonight as I drift away to wherever we go when life releases us to fumble in the darkness. Thank you for this lovely present.
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That is an excellent share, dear FD. There is that meadow that indeed brightens the darkness and pauses the fumbling for a delicious interlude. Many pleasant returns. 🕊️🙏
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Thanks for the thanks, and know that I had to reread this piece three more times while here, just for the giggles; it makes me see those very old hilarious colored cartoons with the crazy characters like Betty Boop (my all-time favorite anime crush), before Disney homogenized them all.
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Like Jessica Rabbit, you mean…homogenised, although she seems to be from WB if I’m not mistaken.
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Well, I like Jessica, but I mean the really OLD cartoons, probably 20, 30 years or more before the very sexy Jessica. These were before Mickey. I’ll have to do some research and get back to you.
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You were probably thinking of Red Hot Riding Hood as Olive Oyl doesn’t seem to match the raciness of these other caricatures. (Early 30’s before the censors kicked in) methinks.
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Read MoreYou are my sunny daysYou are my museYet you come like a coffee without sugarAnd cigarettesEnjoyableBut never enoughYou leave me longing for more.
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very sweet and relatable 🙏💚
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Thank you. 🙂
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Read MoreWhen calloused hands touch skinShivers cascade throughNot wanting to break the spellFelt as if this moment was meant for youLooking into the depths of blacknessSeeing the care and wantWant to remove all the sadnessUnderstanding flows through that I can’tSeconds...
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What a lovely piece of writing Fia. Great rhymes, outstanding flow.
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Thank you. Appreciate that. been a busy week for me
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nothing wicked about this, but the sadness of it hits home here.
you display strength and insight.
thanks for sharing.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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Yes a little sad but we think of life as a little calloused and the piece fits. Tight
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Thank you, ME;))
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Chère F.,
My heart jumps up a little, when I see you’ve posted one of your beautiful writes.
And this one is a wake up call for me. I’ve never given much thought about my hands as is done here.
It reminds me to work harder in my allotment garden.
An allotment garden on the edge of Amsterdam? Some people have all the luck huh?Great poem.
I’ll be looking out for the next one.
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Thank you, Gus😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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While the reader can not fail to get the message that both runs throughout and underpins this epic post, the penultimate and summative lines are surely to die for .. Write on sister F .. Neville 😎🌻👍
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Thank you, Neville 😊
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Such a bittersweet piece. The ache and yearn…and the stepping back. Totally felt
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Thank you, Willow 😊
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This is some vivid, intense scenery you painted here, Fia
Your words flowed very well for my eyes to follow and my mind to absorb.
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Thank you Naaj:))
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Magnificently sensual and breathtakingly passionate. I could feel this encounter unfold through your vivid and powerful telling that brought me into the depths of the hearts of these lovers. And that closing with the calloused hand withdrawing made for an ending to be remembered, my friend.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Read MoreThey tell the story of a maiden.Some say she was as fair as can be.Some say she was young. Or died as old as one can be.They say one day,her soul fell into a deep sleep.For nights on end,she would...
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Tight rhyming
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Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. Excellent write my friend this one has layers. I dig layers. Appreciate you.
Damian