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Read MoreCheckout at the marketThere she is21 years oldDropped out of high school at 16Baby in one armFive year old at her feetTwo different fathersThey both left as soon as they knew she was pregnantShe lives with her mom &...
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Tragedy & the dark. As you can see that’s what I love to write about. It comes easy for me to illustrate. Thank you John.
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It is a sad reality for most. But her priorities are fucked! Thank you my friend. Appreciate the feedback!
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Truth be told. Life is often cold.
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Thank you Joe.
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Another write that punches you in the gut. Well done!
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Thanks M.E. Appreciate the comment.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Priorities lead to choices, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s the truth. Appreciate the feedback.
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Priorities schmiorities… it is indeed a sad reality for many as Adira stated. But I mean come on??? I’d free bleed if it came down to feeding my kid, something’s gotta give here…
Also hope the POS who gave her the bruises got what he deserved..
Well done my friend, you’re amazing as always!
xx
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Hello P.G Thanks so much for the read and comments. Sadly, this a reality for many in this country. xo
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You did a great job with this, dear Keith! You are a precise observer and fantastic and non judgmental storyteller who léaves it to the reader to make up their own mind. Concerning me, I pity the woman but at the same time I can’t understand that her baby isn’t her first priority. If possible, breastfeeding would be a wise idea to give the child a solid basis for a healthier life. Maybe, just maybe this baby could be the person to break the vicious crcle of violence, poverty and hopelessness.
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Hello Sappho. Options were there for this woman but she chose what mattered for herself, not the baby. You hope the kid has a brighter future, but the % of that is very slim. Thanks my friend.xo
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Read MoreYou and me Let's do it!The rooftop tonightLife hasn't been so good to usShe agreedWe arrived at the top of our apartment complex10 stories down is the sidewalkI looked at her she looked at meI turned aroundShe threw herself...
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Wow, you hold nothing back when you write the dark my friend. Truly a deeply dark and hauntingly horrific look at two people who have given up on life. You do the dark better than any writer I have read.
John
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WOW! Thanks for the awesome comment John. Thank you!!
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HA! Bring it on!
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Damn, Keith. Powerfully penned my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
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Haha! Damn it, Keith,
you cease to surprise me. I’ve gotta stay on my toes with you.xx
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Always & forever P.G. Thanks for the comments..xo
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Honoria and
Visions_of_Insanity are now friends
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Read MoreThe boy was raped by his mother's father at 8, 11 & 12 years oldShe was raped by her father & uncle at 6, 9, 11 & 14 years oldA year ago, the boy's father left home for another...
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Tragic. He obviously needed help
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Yup. Sadly it was too late. Thanks Fia.
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Brutal and powerful work.
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Thanks Thomas
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I can barely keep up with all this incest, Keith. This is worse than General Hospital. Where do you dream this stuff up? I’m standing on a ledge after reading it.
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HAHA! General Hospital SUCKS! I don’t know. I’m fucked in the head i guess. Don’t jump. I have more for you to read. xo
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Read MoreOne day my parents were about to go out for a driveSatan appeared and said, "one of you must die" He performed some witchery with his handsSaid something foreign that my parents didn't understand That night my mother saw something as...
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Wait, I’m talking to the anti-Christ? You need to get your number changed. I know a guy…
Moral of the story is close the damn window when you’re taking a bath and don’t accept recipes from creatures.I actually thought fast food was a bad idea until I read this…
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YES! I am the antichrist. Watch the next time you take a bath DK. Don’t eat fast food, eat walnut maple fudge! Thanks my friend. xo
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This was like Rosemary’s Baby with a dark sense of humor, Keith. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes. Thanks Damian.
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Powerfully written, highly realistic, and illuminating poem on some people’s lives. You wrote this so well, my friend. The ongoing tragedy is captured with vivid and clear storytelling that gives the reader a glimpse into what is going on with this woman through observations so clear that I can empathize with her. She seems to be a result of an upbringing that left her lost. And you illustrate this perfectly here.
John