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Read MoreShe came home from her jobNot a great job, but a jobHer husband has been unemployed for 3 yearsSays he's looking for the right job to make a name for himselfThey don't have enough money to feed themselves and...
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Thank you.
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The terrifying thing about these almost disturbing pieces is that they read with such (pardon the pun) deadly accuracy & far too much semblance of reality to them. Damn
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I try to capture the play by play and to get the reader inside that room with these individuals. Thanks Willow for the kind words.
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I sometimes think people try to hide that there are really bad upbringings. My father wasn’t abusive but I did have a rough childhood. I seen plenty of families that were basically this.
Yeah, that mother fucker deserved it. Great ink.
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Glad you enjoyed Nick. Thanks.
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Thanks Adira. About publishing, maybe one day.
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This one is so bloody good…
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Thank you my dear friend. Peace to you PAR.
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Read MoreShe likes him because she could see his deep-seeded hatred for womenEvery time they have sex, he thought of himself as some kind of slick con-man, managing to talk his way into her pantiesHe feels like a safe crackerHe...
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Unfortunately, this really does go down, Keith. But you really described the reality of this pseudo relationship. so to speak. Brilliantly penned, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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I’ve seen too many relationships like this. I think people can be rather self destructive. Abuse can also mess with our heads. We tend to believe that we are only as good as what our abusers tells us. It’s difficult to get away from that but most people live better lives once they do. Great ink.
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Thank you Nick. Appreciated.
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Read MoreHe would go to those dancesHe could never get the nerve to ask a girl to danceLike he would really know what to do when he got out on the floorHe had tried dancing alone in his room and...
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I remembered this one, Keith. This was one of the first endings you threw me a curve. I did not see vomiting while dancing to Foreigner. I like them as a band. But they did have those power ballads. lol. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HA! Glad you remembered this one. Peace to you my friend.
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Read MoreShe was a teenage virgin cashierFrom some Dixie state far from hereUntil one dayI asked her out on a dateShe said sure why notI just can't tell my pop One cold night in NovemberThis is the story that I rememberWe...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Looks like we got a double feature of horror tonight. You gotta beware of a gang of Raccoons, carrying the Bubonic Plague my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Those suckers are dangerous. Thanks my friend.
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Vivid and sharp. Powerful work.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciated.
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This starts like a teenage hookup and switch to the exorcist and end like Evil dead. But why The Ring poster?! Lol
A poem that I enjoy seeing in a movie. Well done, my friend! “)
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Thanks M.E. The Ring poster was something that kind of looked fucked up and I felt it fit the look I was going for the girls rabid transformation. Thanks for the read & comments.
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You do love to scare the bejesus out of me. Good poem;))
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Glad you were scared. Thanks Fia!!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian