Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write, the words sway like a pendulum my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

This feels like a snake bite. Injection of venom feeling the sting of the bite. Nicely done

Passionately penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

There’s a relatable feeling that comes with this. That thirst and insatiable hunger is there in the lines. I know the feeling. Nice writing.

This is hot and delicious. You wrote this perfectly

Powerfully penned, Keith. There are dangers everywhere, clever write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Yes, hanging is not a game at all. It is quite uncomfortable in fact. Interesting write.

A thought provoking poem, dear Keith! The curiosity of young people is needed to explore and understand this world. But sometimes we underestimate the fact that children often don’t think about possible consequences of their actions, while they are engaged in making new experiences. Meaningful and important work, my friend!

Wham. You nailed it.

Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is a powerful, deeply moving piece, my friend! Too many people confuse the claim to possess somebody with love. Love blooms only in freedom and mutual respect! Especially the sentence ‘I hate you for loving mé’ cuts like a knife.