can you give me directions to this lake… I have to have a good talk with that lady…

Thank you so much Timmy appreciate it;))

Thank you. I need to take a walk there.

Thank you, Angel. I do not know who the woman was by the lake. I closed my eyes and that’s what happened. I’m glad that it touched you and made you think of the Beatles; that’s cool.

Thank you, Adira—blessings to you.

Powerful. I does feel as if we are being swarmed at the moment.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Always watching. Appreciate you.

Damian

It sure is a bloomin jungle out there isn’t it .. inkredibly well captured if not tamed .. Neville 😎👍

Has anyone figured out how to edit on this site? There’s a change I want to make.

Please go to the dashboard. There is a pen. Click on it and you can edit your work.

Thank you. I just updated it, so it’s a little different now.

Yes, you understand what I was saying. Thank you.

Exactly, Indie. Thank you.

Love this entreaty poem. Indeed we seek a way out of the darkness and it often helps to have a helping hand from someone we can trust. Truly a beautiful nocturne poem that resonated in the chambers of my soul.

John

Love the ending of this, and I love the succinct texture. You add depth as you go until the whole piece becomes a metaphorical journey. I like where you take this.