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Read MoreI watched another sun come upAnd another sun has setAs shadows lengthen into the nightBut nights no darker than the dayAnd my lifeBoth good and badLies wasted in the stainThe feeling of lostWhich cradles me now in emptinessAnd for...
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The beauty of love is all that we imagine. The death of love is never what we thought.
Thank you for reading (my writes often ramble), and sharing your thoughts and compliments with me.Here’s to the sweetness of the dream. 🍻 Cheers!
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Glad to share my summer and my Joe speak with you. Its funny that one day pain doesn’t hurt anymore, except sometimes. But if it didn’t hurt, was love really real?
To summer! 🍻 cheers!
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Average Joe started the topic Memorial Day in the forum Underground Caverns
“If Your Reading This” by Tim McGraw
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Read MoreBohemain Womanbohemian woman wild spiriteddaydreaming blues shade her personalityhippie chick her rock n roll styleseductive culinary as she marries flavorsgentle as a flower but powerfulher love of her man fiercenothing stands in the way of itthe wind and air...
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You wouldn’t be knowing anyone like that would you? Enjoyed this my friend, always clever with your words 🌼
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hello dearest Joe smiles I do know this kind of lady she shines ❤️
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I believe she does 🌼
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wrote this poem about me shes a wonderful, beautiful,and talented one of a kind woman
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hello beautiful Lora good morning thank you for just being you and being there for me 💕
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“a lovely hellion of sorts don’t mess with her” love that line.
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thank you graciously lovely Fia I can sense power in you too ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian she is one of the people helping me through this time just lovely ❤️
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Outstanding. Your words captivate Brenda. Marvelous!!
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hello dearest Keith thank you graciously she is a captivating woman ❤️
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Read MoreI'm a lover of progressive and psychedelic rock... I like the harmony injected ...
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Beautifully penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! You know I love poems that have talk of music in them. Great write my friend. Love the layout and the creativity, nice execution on the difficulty. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Obrigado, Damian. ❤
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Groovy piece my friend. Lets a take a trip on a magic ocean. Everything will be real fine. Peace to you my dear friend.
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Obrigado, Keith. ❤
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Obrigado! ❤
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Joe, that is just breathtaking. What an incredible catharsis. I’ve read many things about the disintegration of love, the falling away – but never anything so utterly raw and weeping as this. Such detail and emotion. The final freedom you describe is so anticlimactic, so real in its hollowness. The wound is so visible, the pain so palpable.
Second person narrative is hugely effective here. It magnifies the emotion of your piece considerably.