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Read MoreShe was An exquisite mime A carved forgotten beauty Blindsided my dreamscape...she did Propped her...
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I’m glad you dug that particular stanza, Fia.
It’s pretty much the center piece of the mood sing I was
in when I penned this vibe.Big thx for the support
Naaj
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Beautifully penned, Naaj. Wonderful imagery and a great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yeah, this one sits in a very special corner of my mind.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts always, DamianNaaj
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She’s occupied my mind for decades.
Very special indeed.Thx for dropping your thoughts hun
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Read MoreClose my eyes right before the impactStray bullets masked as fake applause Through all the pain my soul still intactFuck being perfect I embrace my flaws Takes more imagination than I possessTo pretend their intentions aren’t cruelInstead of knowing they made...
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You start out with the bullet. Damn
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know how to make an entrance or introduction in this case. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I agree with Fia. Very powerful write Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re welcome. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Ya know, I would love to sit down one day with a cup of coffee, a cat & a fire just to read your entire collection. You never…not once…disappoint, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart such a cool and touching comment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sometimes life is like playing Russian Roulette. There’s truth in this.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It sometimes seems that way, I wish it wasn’t. Appreciate you.
Damian
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We play Russian Roulette with our lives everyday. Sad but true. Powerful piece my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Unfortunately, that appears to be the case. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreA touch babe I’m distracted with the distance of things Out of sorts Though I would not call it so But lately Time does seem to keep a strange measure The day goes not too...
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hello dearest Joe this is beautiful I love your own vulnerability here 💕
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Everyone would like reassurance sometimes. We always say I love you but sometimes our inner child needs to be shown. 🌼
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Too few actually speak their vulnerability & ask for what’s needed. The beauty in the honesty of this is breathtaking
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A little honesty saves a lot of heartache. People grow, change, get caught up in different things. Remembering the beginning, when everything was just a dream…is honest measure.🌼
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Read MoreKafka: I exist in a corridor without doors,where names crumble before they are read.Each face I create dissolves into the mist,like a crime without a defendant, like love without a letter. Marilyn: I exist in the light that never rests,trapped...
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This may be your masterpiece my friend, or perhaps one of many masterpieces in your case. It’s incredible dialogue but their tongues speak poetry, not just casual conversation words. Damn, this was Chef’s Kiss. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for being there my friend. ❤
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The back-and-forth banter is done well. The use of questioning each other I enjoyed.
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Thank you, appreciate you!
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The dialogue was great. Your a talent. Well done my friend.
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Viva Keith… I keep waiting for your comments.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Your writing shines. Excellent as always!
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Love this stanza and the picture is beautiful.
“She’d string together days of future-past theories
Just for me…where we aged like fine wine
Where all of our what-ifs became that potent fifth
Of liquefied love”