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good evening dearest John you do me honor thank you most graciously my friend 💕
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Unapologetically penned, Brenda. This is raw passion unleashed my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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hello beautiful poetess thank you most graciously good evening 💕
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Read MoreOne of the first times Iwent to jail, it was inPolk County forpublic intox.Drunk in public.I was homeless for years,where else was I supposedto get drunk?They took me to thestation booked me, and gaveme my phonecall.I called the bail...
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You write this story with such clarity and weave it into an engaging scene that reaches out and rivets my attention. Great poem.
John
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Thank you, John.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it Damian
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You have expressed a real life tale with honesty and clarity.
I have been there. Got locked up for being drunk in public myself once.
I think I said to a police officer “Your a C…U…N…T. I didn’t say it i just spelt it out.
He didn’t understand. When he realised what I was saying I was thrown in the van.
I they took my clothes and gave me some grey prison scrubs. When I sobered up I started singing prison songs.
“He’s in the jailhouse now.” and Locked up by Akon. Some counties in England are stricker on booze than others. I have been out of my mind all over England, but Yorkshire was the place they locked me up. Don’t do it in Yorkshire.Thanks for sharing this poem. I am glad to know I am not the only one.
regards
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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This sounds like such a Midwest thing. Great telling of the night!
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lol. Thanks
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Thank you so much.
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This is an emotional tour de force of dark poetry my friend. You captivate me with this darkly lit poem. A real work of art.
John
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hello dearest John wow that’s a beautiful comment thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great dark poetry my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate hearing from you… you make my day 💕
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Read MoreWhen heat rises off your body and it's not from Passion When you struggle to find the words any words because you lost your voice When tiny beads of sweat escape not from pores, indicating it's time The Great Wall of Fia...
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hello beautiful Fia I’m sorry you’re feeling icky I hope yu feel better soon drink some green tea with a little tumeric it should help 💕great write
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Thank you, crimsin. add the turmeric to the tea?
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make it like an english tea a little creamer, green tea, a half teaspoon of turmeric in the hot tea you will feel better the tumeric helps with body aches and you don’t tasted it in the tea…I know it sounds weird but it’s good…
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Thank you, Ravens:)
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Get well…..words need to be written.
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Thank you, Peter. Appreciate that
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Get well, Fia. Even when you’re sick, you write incredibly. Get so me rest my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Fia very sorry for your ailment. But you sure wrote a fantastic poem about it. Digs deep and you really made it an engaging read. Hope this comment finds you feeling better.
John
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Thank you, goldenmist
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Sickness is sometimes like love. You don’t know if your coming or going.
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Thank you, Casket. I sure did not know what was going on.
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Read More“In pussy I may have lucked-upBut in the end my life became fucked-up, “Maybe at many of those moments I should have had my nineFire in the hole, now a bitch could have had a real hot time, ...
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I appreciate this. There is a lot of truth in this poem many have or are going thru everyday.
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I understand completely
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This is so incredibly scintillating. You write this succubus with the virtuosity of a poet who knows her craft and knows it well. I could feel this deep in my core. I was seduced and stimulated by your fiery sensual words.
John