The last stanza is brilliant. Love it and the poem. Great work!

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Preach my brother, preach! You nailed this out of the park. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Awesome.
Indeed, it’s that little angel/demon upon our shoulder, compelling us to write something, anything, to relieve the pressure of wanting to say something to the void. Life?Love?Pain?Loss? All of it.
Your write is terrific. I think we all write “for ourselves”. yet to have someone acknowledge our words does mean a lot. It makes us feel like it does matter, after all.

Excellent ink & Not a single drop wasted .. Neville 😎👍

Thank you, my friend.

Yep. That’s just the way it is. We create because that’s how we deal with the world.

That last stanza…is everything. It’s never about accolades. It’s because we must. Damn…

So true.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful work. You paint this scene well.

dark, delectable, demonic, dirtily dished-out-damnation of the damsel’s sexual soul – I loved it, Crimsin! Harriet-Jacqui xx

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Felt this one. Appreciate you.

Damian

Heartfelt. Well written Brenda.xox

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write my friend. I concur with Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian