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Warm sexy and intimate…..a smooth elixir no doubt
Much respect
Naaj
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This is a wonderful, intimate and tender poem , dear Crimsin! The imagery is amazing and cleverly chosen!
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Lovely Brenda. This is delicate and heartwarming. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo
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…an oasis of dreams. Fantastic, Brenda!
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Sensual, symbolic, and steeped in metaphor—this feels like desire rendered as prayer.
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Read Moredelicate understanding, I have made you feel forgottendreaded truth, I've been adrift and all the world is a blurI'm losing myself forgetting what I once knewyour face haunts my dreamsI've let you down and I can't change thatmy heart...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A very introspective write my friend. Thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More3rd Rock from the Sun .... burned beyond recognition .........crashed landed.... Spiritually branded Enchanted by that ...infernal Genie in a Bottle Gaslit from Day One...de-deuced from Adamant ....,,,to just a damned ant... Panting...ranting...in past tense .... full of pre-tense Full of Shit... ...a Facsimile therein of...trying to catfish...His own...
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Brilliantly penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. Dig the layers in this one it’s a hard hitting powerhouse that’s spitting facts. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big thx for your energy on this vibe, bro.
Deeply appreciated indeedNaaj
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Oh, I am glad I discovered this (not for all, but for me) and I must ask you this: have you made any audios of your work? this is only the second one of your works I have read, and it begs the be heard. I must say I’m a bit prejudiced in that, being one who comes from that stable, but this really would be even more impressive aloud. Nice work, sir.
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I haven’t done any audits yet but will be in the near future. Thx for the positive vibes, FD.
Much respect
Naaj
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If you do, let me know; we have a Spoken Word category here now and a lot of us are building a library, of sorts, of diverse works. Check it out; there are some excellent pieces there.
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Read Moreit isn't all tinsel tiny lights all twinklingcandles on the mantelscent of cookies in the airsometimes...it's different daddy rolled his chair up to the windowgazing out into a snowy nightno cheery carolers on the porchno tree adorning the cornertwo little girls...
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This is a hard hitting one because I do relate to this piece.i enjoy your work
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Thank you, Fia 🎄☃️
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Oh! it makes me think back to simpler times when things weren’t all amuck.
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There’s a truth!
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Excellent lyrics my friend. Really dig the musical accompaniment. I heard gospel and r&b elements maybe a touch of Motown. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A lot of the bones for this was Southern Rock. I always enjoy how you feel out all the textures. It’s like a treasure hunt, finding all the pieces that make it a cohesive whole. I rolled into nostalgia and came out with this one, my friend
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Not everything comes shiny and new for Christmas but its the effort that counts
Unfortunately, when tragedy happens it doesn’t care what day it is.
I hope you and your family had a great Christmas Day:). Always focus on the positive here and now chica:)
They carry us through the hard times.Merry Christmas 🎄
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I’m not chasing shadows. But I feel strongly about honoring the roots, where I came from and what molded me into who I am today. Those experiences taught me to pay it forward, appreciate what we have and keep the fire lit in the heart. Thank you, Adelphina
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This poem honors the truth many people carry through the holidays—the quiet grief, the missing chairs, the love that survives scarcity. It’s honest without bitterness, and that makes it powerful.
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Good times may dawn, but I never forget where I came from and where others might still be. It’s not about wallowing in the memories, it’s about honoring them and making space for them by the hearth. Thank you so much, Thomas
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I live a dual awareness, I think. Because I’m so familiar with the shadows, I’m aware that others might be struggling even while I’m thriving. I was there once. And could be again one day. I honor those memories and those souls as best I can. My experiences helped me raise a daughter more aware and giving than she might have been in other circumstances. We believe strongly in giving back and paying it forward. Thank you, Honoria…it’s good to see you roaming the halls
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This is a something you will have to ponder on and hope to get the answer to.
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thank you lovely Fia I got an answer it just wasn’t the one I wanted I appreciate you ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you graciously dearest Damian I appreciate you 🙂
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Fantastic, my friend.
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian