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Read MoreIt was a four-horse race atSanta Anita.I was with my old man andlittle brother.I put everything I had onthe number 3 horse to show.His name was Dusty's Diaper.Shoemaker was aboard;the shoe, for God's sake.It was a sure thing.All he...
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Thank you.
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This has a immense warmth to it.
Much enjoyed.
regards
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Thank you.
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Hi Thomas.
I completely agree with Nev.
I also liked how you specified 12 years old.
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Thanks.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend, this one pulled at these old heartstrings of mine. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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Hello Thomas. Your writing pulls me in every time. As though I’m standing right by you, living through what you wrote. Marvelous description, memorable write.
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I appreciate that.
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Beautiful write. The ending really got to me. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you.
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I appreciate that.
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First you took us to a memory. Then that last line. And that is the reason the memory matters. Beautiful. I knew mine wouldn’t live long, still hurts he’s gone
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This is very good, Brenda.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you for the love on this write ❤️
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Haha. Loved the attitude at the end.
Yes, we all hope to see our lovers in our next life, cheers to that!-
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good morning beautiful Adelphian thank you graciously I appreciate you ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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Chère C.,
Oh yes, I can relate to this: between hope and fear.
Love your talent and your ability to (re) organise my mood.Warm regards, Gus
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hi dearest Gus thank you so much for sharing your thoughts ❤️
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Sexy write Brenda. Nice work.
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hello dearest Keith thank you graciously ❤️
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I enjoyed this. My favoirite line was “mingling on the winds” something magical.
Kind regards
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thank you graciously dearest James I appreciate you ❤️
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“hoping you still see something redeemable in me” That is powerful, crimsin
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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Magnificent write Brenda. The sadness of this piece lured me in.
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thank you graciously dearest Keith for the love on this ❤️
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Brilliantly penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As I read I am “tumbling through the centuries” with you. A ghost, witnessing with no power to save. Your writing never disappoints, fantastic piece!
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Read MoreI. The Symbolic Foundation ~~ In the Beginning ~~ ~~ The Square ~~ Stoicism Embodied ~~ This square represents his structurePeace of Mind, Passion, Purpose, Self-PreservationEach corner balances the man's world:Emotional Equilibrium, creative fire, direction, end disciplined restraintTo " stand on his square...
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this is quite beautiful in understanding of the balance between spirit, mind and body all encompassing the soul…I feel it’s calming effect in my innerself great write dearest Naajir I missed when you write like this ❤️
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Thank you Brenda. It’s been a helluva tulmoutous year and these latest vibes feels like a reset of sorts. I’m glad this one resonates with you.
Much luv
Naaj
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Brilliantly penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend, this has depth and layers brother. I dig it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big thx for the energy, my brother. This has indeed been a year of
introspection, humility and spiritual nuance. I’m glad this vibed with youMuch respect
Naaj
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Thank you so much for droppin in, Lady and sharing such in-depth insights.
There are more to come but will be spread out over time
Always deeply appreciate you indeedNaaj
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Fantastic! You have the gift of evolution, rising with your words.
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Many thanks or your thoughts on this vibe, Abbey.
Streamlining jaggedness is the constant task of any poet.
Much appreciated.Naaj
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Read MoreThere indeed comes a time When a man must stop running from himselfThis manifesto is a call for every man of tribe and faith To return to their CovenantTo live by principle and balance...hence The Covenant of Alignment The Covenant of ResponsibilityThe Covenant of MasteryThe Covenant...
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Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend, dig this brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Huge thx or your thoughts on this one bro.
More to come for sure in this laneMuch respect
A Devout Humanist
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Thank you or the support, hun
I deeply appreciate itMuch respect
A Devout Humanist
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Soul excavation and spiritual reset. That’s how this reads to me. You’ve never been one to shy away from your shadows.
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Reconciliation, redemption and restitution…words from a much earlier poem [circa 2012]
that stayed with me and laid the foundation for this vibe. You have always gotten me, Willow
And I am forever appreciative.Much respect
Naaj
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Poignant to the point of poetic perfection Thomas .. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍👍