Astounding imagery! That last stanza was interesting :0

To be continued? Really good, Daniel

This lady doesn’t fuck around my friend. Epically penned, Daniel. Incredible imagery. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Joe so much passion inside you I am overcome with a feeling sigh to be loved like this beautiful 💕

Aww, not a dream. That is perfect. Nice spill.

Powerful. Stay alive.

Powerful and profound… The Samurai believed that everyday one should consider oneself already dead. That we should meditate daily on death in the worst possible ways. Tis far out… Takes great bravery to endeavor upon such reflections. That is the kind of bravery I see here. The bravery to gaze into the abyss, which is perhaps an inevitability. Very nicely done thoughtsdie.

Very good description, this book is shaping up. Nice

Thank you.

Your clear communication of your mental state is precise and strong. I felt like I should be there to show you that you are so much more than a little dot.

Thank you for the support. I really appreciate it.