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hello dearest John wow that’s a beautiful comment thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great dark poetry my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate hearing from you… you make my day 💕
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#?
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What do you mean by ?. 🙂
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what’s your number?
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🙂
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An invitation that is hard to refuse. Strong tonic.
John
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Thank you dear. I appreciate you reading it.
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Thank you a lot. 🙂
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Read MoreWhen heat rises off your body and it's not from Passion When you struggle to find the words any words because you lost your voice When tiny beads of sweat escape not from pores, indicating it's time The Great Wall of Fia...
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hello beautiful Fia I’m sorry you’re feeling icky I hope yu feel better soon drink some green tea with a little tumeric it should help 💕great write
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Thank you, crimsin. add the turmeric to the tea?
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make it like an english tea a little creamer, green tea, a half teaspoon of turmeric in the hot tea you will feel better the tumeric helps with body aches and you don’t tasted it in the tea…I know it sounds weird but it’s good…
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Thank you, Ravens:)
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Get well…..words need to be written.
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Thank you, Peter. Appreciate that
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Get well, Fia. Even when you’re sick, you write incredibly. Get so me rest my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Fia very sorry for your ailment. But you sure wrote a fantastic poem about it. Digs deep and you really made it an engaging read. Hope this comment finds you feeling better.
John
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Thank you, goldenmist
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Sickness is sometimes like love. You don’t know if your coming or going.
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Thank you, Casket. I sure did not know what was going on.
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Read More“In pussy I may have lucked-upBut in the end my life became fucked-up, “Maybe at many of those moments I should have had my nineFire in the hole, now a bitch could have had a real hot time, ...
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I appreciate this. There is a lot of truth in this poem many have or are going thru everyday.
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I understand completely
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Read MoreWhen you used to gaze into my eyes that was so beautiful... Then I could gaze back into those emerald gems... It wasn't the cute light of your soul, rather the beauty of your darkness... Since we broke up, my eyes still chase you through light...
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hello dearest Daniel this would make a great song…I’m sad I understand your darkness I have it myself I gave up long ago that the beings of light would except me… though in part I burn with the light… great write…💕
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Thanks as always, Brenda! Im still in the shadows gazing at her light… pretty lonely place…
Daniel
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I understand Daniel we are very different as you know… we can dream but never see her light better than yourself this is great beauty in the dark 💕
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Love the depth of this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is an emotional tour de force of dark poetry my friend. You captivate me with this darkly lit poem. A real work of art.
John