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    Good Bye

    I called my momTo tell her I love her And then I told my wife I was going for a driveI gave her a hug goodbye Then I texted my son When I got in the carBecause I couldn't bearTo...

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    • This reminds me of those movies in the 80’s. they seemed to have that theme going through them.

    • A dark one. I can picture someone standing at his grave. Suddenly they get dizzy and hear him speaking these words. As they snap out of it, they wonder if they were dreaming, or if it was real.

    • Dude, nope. Not allowed.
      I realize that this is creative writing. But it also leans me towards a bit of concern.
      Shine your light in here, high.

    • hello Mr. D we all feel like that sometimes I hope this finds you well and depression has lossened its grip ❤️

    • Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. Depression is a powerful beast that twists and distorts everything around us, I speak from experience of course. The important thing is to always look towards the light, if you’re climbing towards that light, eventually you get out of the hole. That’s my best advice. It’s not easy but worth it. Best wishes my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you all for commenting..it’s just creative writing..I’m in a writing void so going back to my bread and butter and writing about death

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    when the choice is required
    and compromise is not an option
    do you choose to soothe your own pain?
    or that of others?

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  • April 11th — Ladders, Snakes and the Art of Forgetting

    April 11th arrives
    like a board game spilled across the floor,
    ladders leaning toward impossible heights,
    snakes coiled in patient spirals,
    waiting for the moment
    you think you understand the rules.

    It is a day of ascents and descents,
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    and quiet collapses,
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    Voices in Motion

    The windwill not stop sighing—soft, insistent, foreign—hour upon hour... It runs the fields,threads through trees,hissing night into day. It summons—warns—whispers somethingI cannot,alone,perceive. The wind will not stop sighingas it slides over cold, sullen waters,bending brown marsh grass low,imploring the roaming thrushes—some sharp,...

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