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    honesty

    as an unwitting participant in the undercurrent of darknessaffecting things great and smallmaneuvering the aether with a kissspiraling thoughts become worldsan act so small as a whisper can alter thingscause chaos in the grander scheme of thingsso I utter...

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    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you dearest Damian most gracioulsy I wasn’t sure how this would be received 💕 have a good day…

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    An Order of Inequalities.

    I failed her test.We were two equationsfrom the startwe just didn't add up. If my brain is travelingat 80 miles per hourand hers at 50,how long will it taketo determineour possible chemistry? She studied me,but couldn't findthe answer. Now I'm back,trying to...

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    • I love the math component in this. Some things don’t always add up but we must figure out the equation:))

    • Force of attraction formula in physics.
      F = G * (m1 * m2) / r².

      Force of attraction formula in humans
      L= G * (m1 * m2) / r².

      Where L is Love
      G is Gentleman
      M1 is number of times he messed up
      M2 is number of times she messed up
      R is number of failed make up attempts.

    • Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing wordplay, love the whole equation vibe. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

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    • Tim I absolutely loved this. This is a brilliant use of the math metaphor for relationships with women. Truly an enjoyable and amazing read for me tonight.

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    • Damn. This is next level. Mixing poetry AND math. Brilliant!!!

      Much respect

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    • This is gentle and clever the way you turn numbers into feeling it lands with a quiet ache. I always can expect something fresh every time I go to the back of the book if you will…

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