No one had the tonsils that Janis had. Love it.

Girl beautifully written, I could picture it.

Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well?

I’ve been reading your writes with very much pleasure.
Even our musical tastes seem to have parallels.
The first Verve and Capitol LP’s by Janis Ian are still proudly in my cupboard and on my record player.
If you want to have the Janis Joplin recordings in Het Concertgebouw in Amsterdam, please let me know.

I’ll PM you for the rest.

Please keep those writes of yours coming.

Kind regards, Gus

This is amazing. Love the lyrical poetry and the meaning behind it.

Lots of truth to this, but not all. I know the trophy wives. I had crushes on them in High school. Now their married to powerful men. Life is an odd thing sometimes.

My last comment for you. You’re very talented, good luck with your writing. 🙂

Thank you! Part two coming out by tomorrow morning and things get steamier hahahaha 😆

Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist

Hehehe go ahead and fantasize! Part Two out tonight or tomorrow morning hahaha 😆

Erotic writing at its best! You’re a great storyteller, eloquent and creative. This piece is damned hot!!!

This is an interesting piece starting off one way and flipping it around. That is how life is, right?

The first one is better in my opinion. Our minds are a battlefield.

Powerfully penned, Daniel. Sound advice my friend, lots of truths in this write. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is sound advice, and I’m pretty sure someone would have needed that.

Thank you, Adira! Writing this made me feel much like an old wise man… lmao. And I hope I can benefit from it as well and write more inspirational pieces!

Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist