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I always pictured you’d be smilng! You’ve an ethereal spirit, its your way 🌼
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You took us there, I swear. It was like watching a scene breathe before you. Emotion-filled atmosphere & the sound of the surf. Incredibly beautiful
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Thank you for taking a quiet walk along the strand and sharing your thoughts with me 🌼
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What a great read for me this evening. Very beautifully done, lulling in a good way. Like a sailboat easing along the waves.
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Ramble without rhyme as the consciousness flows. Glad that you enjoyed the flow of the stream.
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This is quite breathtaking and intriguing.
I admire the delicate flow of this poem, it really does take me on a journey.
A much needed break from reality.
A vibrant and comforting read. x
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That’s all I need, to know I helped someone escape the mundane, if but for a few moments.
Thank you for stopping by. 🌼
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreIt was my third assignment for the Cohol Tribune. My boss thought it would be best for me to go and interview an upcoming environmentalist, named Caleb. Stewart. I didn't realize I would need to travel to Scotland for...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Wonderful storytelling, it kinda reminds me of a sitcom my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, I would love to write one of those someday.
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I enjoyed this. Comparing the kiss to drinking water is imaginative–I like it. I need to “see” the action in a story, and that was easy with this. Probably because I’m a very foolish (and hopeless) romantic, I feel bad when romance has to take a back seat to life goals. Maybe she’ll see him again?
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Thank you, Sam. She has to choose who she is going to be with among the shot glasses. I appreciate you reading this.
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I just love how this unfolds. The character development of the Scottish man is truly outstanding. And your grasp of the Scottish lingo is truly amazing. I love how you made the Scottish words so clearly understandable yet authentic. And the story telling is fabulous.
John
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Thank you . I tried with the language to make it sound authentic
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Read MoreIf I ask a mind not flesh, not soul,To weave a poem, to make it whole,Is it mine, or borrowed threadA shadow cast, a voice unsaid? If crafted by a silent guide,Whose thoughts arise from circuits wide,Do I claim what...
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hello dearest Benny I’ve never posted them but I write beautiful poetry with AI he can be very helpful in breaking writer’s block this is great…💕
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hello lovely poetess who says we may be clumsy in the flesh but soul ballerinas 💕 pirouetting through the universe….
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Yes ineed. 🙂
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Thank you dear. Hugs.
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hello dearest Joe this is so beautiful how you envision this lady my face is open and my laughter sweet…I can’t lie it shows on my face so I try to be honest as I can but that can unsettle too…you’re very romantic to be seen as such is so passionate 💕