This said a lot without it blatantly saying it. It breaks my heart.

Agree with Fia entirely.

10 out of 10

🙏

Quite vivid, it’s captivating the reader.

I’m admiring the character at play.

Wonderful and disturbing at the same time.

A sensual piece. x

You held true to the abrupt end. You have horror and fantasy mixed together here. nice

That’s true. I’m glad you have noticed.

I’d upload more but I think you can only do three poems a day on here. x

Thank you for reading.

Not my usual fare, but well told to.be sure.

Powerfully penned, Rosie. Another excellent write my friend. Amazing imagery once again. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

The horrifying thing is: I can hear the pin in these lines.