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Read MoreI am a riot of morning light, a sudden blooming of silk and sun in a world that sometimes forgets how to glow. My laughter is a silver bell rung in an open field, a sound that carries the...
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Thank you, Atticus.
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Beautiful piece, full of imagery, you write like a friend of our. Believe us this is a very high compliment
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Thank you, I-IS-ME, I’ll take it as such.
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Beautifully penned, Kay. Excellent write my friend with amazing storytelling and dazzling imagery. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I’m stoked you enjoyed the piece.
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Hi K.,
Since 1964 (I believe), I have a flex disk, LP on the ESP’ label that comes to mind when I read your poem.Poet Amiri Baraka is no stranger to controversy, and his work with avant-garde jazz band the New York Art Quartet (NYAQ) was no exception.
It was released under a nom de plume Leroy something, but in essence it was free style poetry against the pulsing ‘beat’ of free jazz.
This interaction worked remarkably well.
Perhaps I may suggest you do something like this (your poem against any type of music you prefer)?Needless to say, I love this poem to bits.
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Hi, Duhsjaak, thank you for your encouraging words. I do love a challenge. And I can rightly say, your suggestion has inspired me to go forth and create.
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This is absolutely lovely. A metaphysical bought down to a sublime earthiness
in one the most eloquent and lyrical excerpt of poetic musing I’ve haven’t experienced in a while
You did the damn thingMuch respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj. Your words are too kind.
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Love all of the unapologetic confidence in this! What a freaking write!
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Thank you, Adelphina. I’m stoked you loved it, much appreciated.
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First poem that I’ve read from you.. and it’s brilliant!
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Thank you, Christopher, your words are too kind. I’m grateful you enjoyed this piece.
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Read More‘Is it tonight?’‘Yes.’‘Why?’She didn’t answer. Instead, she cut off the call. I stuffed my phone into my back pocket and entered the forest. Treading the path that I had trodden so many times before. The looped path. The path...
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Read MoreI am writing and wishing you well.You were a child,I know you did not deserve that hell.I'm writing to come and ask. Are you ready,are you hanging on?Or is life still a task?Little me,you did not deserve the pain. You just...
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Read MoreWhat once i though was love.... Was laced in mushrooms kiss.... One embrace was all it took to feel eternal bliss.... Flying high with fairies dust.... My soul i gave to you entrust.... For many years we flew so high.... Till slowly one day the...
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Powerfully penned, SW. This is a very personal write that kinda draws a line in the sand my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love it,