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    Poet’s Blade

      My blood has no tasteUnless served on a steel plate Sharp enough to chisel fine wordsThat bring primal color to this dinner Paper on a platterI consume to later vomitAcids merged with indigestible flavors Sick poems no one desiresThese cravings...

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    • Quite often even the dark and distasteful thoughts must be laid bear. Maybe we’re under the impression no one cares, but people do relate. This is dark and disturbing. But life is too sometimes.

    • Powerfully penned, thoughtsdie. Amazing write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Love is missing 💕 Love

      A Love Beyond Words Love feels too small a wordTo hold what I feel for youIn these passing days of life. I miss you more thanThis body can ever express,More than words can ever carry. My days drift through duties—Thoughts of my...

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    Corpse Minuet

    I am the shadow that stains your tongue, a slow drip in midnight's corset undone— between your teeth like a psalmechoing from a cellar a corpse minuet before the razor parts the skinin my quasi alto begging for dawn...

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    • Hi
      I see you write with heart, the art work that reveals your writing. You are multiple talented. I see in everything I do does it is really useful for me in my life frankly speaking does it make my bread. I only have a suggestion write more of positive themes, we never know our poem and pic monetise to a million dollar value. Keep writing.

      If you can inspire 10 people it’s equivalent to 10 times, because each one spreads to another 10 people.

      Take my review as constructive feedback. Even though we are suffering with negative people around if we turn that into positive themes then our strength builds. Your tears must strengthen you, you must cry for best things, if we feel sad because people are hurting us then your strength diminishes, instead you come out from that and do better your energized double times.

      Jessy Jacob ❤️

      • Thank you. 98% of what I write is, fiction, no more or less. Shallow minds can take my words however they wish. I write for my own entertaiment.

        • I would say even entertainment pays you best example is instagram shorts it’s gift for you, you are unknowingly unintentionally making bread. But I can relate to your writings becauseany people like me are facing what you write.

          I am not mean but in a way making best use of our life. Mom doesn’t make best food so that she can bribe you to make homework when you were in school it’s her natural way to make you best so i just asked you to take it seriously and change few people life.

          Nothing personal i said.

          • People have the option of readng or not my words I don’t believe in censorship. If people have issues with my words, they should seek help. Once again I say, I write 98% fiction.

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    Purpose of our life

    Here is your writing shaped into a more fluid, reflective prose while preserving your thoughts and meaning: --- Life is a journey.We do not truly know why we are born. We begin by living within the boundaries of our parents’ world,...

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