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good evening dearest Adagio thank you graciously the song put me in a slightly hypntic state beinging forward what was aready in my thoughts thank you very much ❤️
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The whole piece is great but that opening line is magic.
It also reminds me of the movie Dune.
The desert sands look so smooth and soft.
My older son told me once they remind him of butter. lolMark and I had a conversation today about the Sahara desert and how years ago it had an oasis.
How time and the earth can shift!I think I’m inspired now to write about the desert!
You rock chica!
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hello beautiful Adelphina you have a lovely soul and I love where your inspiration took you… I was listening to the song I shared and went into a hypnotic state and landed in the desert in Enoch the angel Michael was ordered to bind his brother Azazel with a chain in the desert who is specifially talking here I am unsure… sometimes I channel what I hear….but that it took you to such a beautiful place is wonderful perhaps to that place before the problems in the Garden thank you sweet lady ❤️
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Cool stuff, Brenda. I like the imagery that you pulled together. It has an almost looming presence overwatching it.
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hello dearest Styxian thank you for picking up the vibe of this write I don’t always like what comes through but am bound to write as I hear…this I believe in part to be Azazel talking thank you for your thoughts ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with amazing imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe Night Calls I was born on a Winter storm filled with lightning, in a room of emptiness, alone, naked, with blood flowing from riotous guitar beats. Trouble was my given name. Life is funny, twisted, with many false destinations, but this road has led me to you, and...
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Awww this is fantastic. I love all the imagery and longing.
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There’s a sense of vastness to this. From the galaxies to the winter storm…and love at the end. I would say this is a powerful poem, my friend
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Benjamin Scraps posted in the group Welcome Group
Good day to you, poets. I’m Benny Scraps. The name was inspired by Paul McCartney’s alter ego name “Billy Shears”. (Benny Scraps…Billy Shears…sounds like a bunch of “BS” either way, right?) Calling myself “Benjamin” Scraps as a form of self-deprecation. My writing is always poetry (no good at prose…tends to read more like a sports article…Read More
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It’s fantastic, Brenda.