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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Give me one more chance
My Father
I only had to love you
But I was a fool
Because I never once
Prayed to you
And I know that is wrong
Yes I should had prayed to you
Every night
But stad I decided not too
Now I am feeling guilty about that
Also I don’t have any respect for you
Please give me another chance Father
I must change
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Read MoreThe velvet of night cascades shadows of cataracts, when the sun goes down. Peeling away the flesh of day...The darkness becoming my illicit lover, masturbating my quill. The ink surrendering its sweet muscatel to your waiting tongue. Ravenously you...
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Thank you, Chrstopher.
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This is simply awesome, my friend! Dark, mysterious, spiced up with creative, empressíve pictures and comparisons.
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Thank you, Elke.
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So much dark intrigue woven into so few words that quickly gripped me by the throat.
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Thank you, Harriet.
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Christopher and
Angel are now friends
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Read MoreThere is a war no one else can hear. It does not sound like bombs or sirens— it sounds like overthinking at 2 a.m., like a heartbeat that won’t slow down, like silence stretching too tight across my ribs. My mind is a general— cold, strategic, disciplined. It...
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POWERFUL, powerful writing.. and yes, you should ALWAYS believe in yourself!!
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I try too, thank you 😊
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Thank you 😊
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it’s still going today.
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With poetic flair, you write words I can relate to. I’m reminded of a dark period I went through long ago. (Divorce and subsequent quest to find love again) I believe storms can’t linger forever, and are eventually pushed aside by the sun and blue skies.
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Read MoreYour mouth is a promise half-kept, half-aching. Red like truth spoken too late, soft like a confession I’m afraid to finish. I don’t touch you yet. That’s where the power lives— in the pause, in the heat gathering behind restraint. Your breath leans toward mine like it already knows how this ends. There...
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Wow.. what a brilliant, romantic and sensual poem! Love it!!😊
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Thank you 😊
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That’s good, I’m glad you like it. I’m happy if I can make someone’s day inspire them and help them that tells me I’m doing something good. 😘
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Sensual and dark in it’s own right.. good poem!!