Haha,,,I love how you show what is happening all around. Then the let’m wait had me smiling

Hey man, how’s it going? It’s been a while since I read your posts. Great write. No apologies here. Fuck em!

Hey Keith
Word up ?
Haven’t written much since the DUP demise but thought I should contribute some smut again !!

Thx bro

Hi P.,
I may have told you I’m a quarter French.
And in France you can get away with pretty much anything as long as you mind your language.
Like this one. Direct, no unnecessary chatter, love it!
Needless to say I’m a huge fan of your writes.
Kind regards, Gus

Passionately penned, Speak. Another excellent write my friend. You always bring you A-game when it comes to telling a story or painting us a picture. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hahaha, don’t know if you intended the humor but it’s there. What else is there to do while waiting on a mile of rail cart. To be honest we really miss those long trains passing by forcing the entire south to slow down even more. America doesn’t use but a fraction of it’s railway potential anymore, we use to move shit

That beginning gives life to this poem even though you bring attention to death. I like the turn in position

Thank you Fia, for reading and commenting.

This tells the reader what you mean but with finesse. Love it

For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.

Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is cool. I like the announcing of April 2nd in this way.

April Fools is practically every day for me. There’s no April 2nds in my life. Awesome piece my friend!!

Something about the way April Fools attracts those with sharpened words and mean thoughts out into the open for a day has always felt wrong to me. I love how you take back the arena with April 2nd, pushing those with ill intentions and bad behavior back into the shadows.

Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write that’s an amazing sequel to “April 1st” my friend. Both writes stand on their own respectively but reading them back to back is chef’s kiss brother. The contrast between the two writes is next level good. I’m a fan of both but dare I say I the sequel might be a smidgen better. Always enjoy reading your work. Appreciate you.

Damian