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good evening dearest Damian I hope you’re well thank you my friend ❤️
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Read MoreCome closer,listen.I need you to hear this.The world is at war.I know it is so,because truth was the first to fall.Fact has become fiction,fiction turned to fact.Seeing is no longer believing,and truth no longer matters.Everything is fake,everything a conspiracy,everything...
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I think the button has already been pressed … nice one
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Spot on in fact. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Spot on..you nailed it..it’s here and most of us are in denial..great write
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Thanks for reading guys….you already knew the war had started….
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Some things are just crying out to be written down and shouted out loud .. This is just one such thing .. I couldn’t agree more sir .. maybe we should form a cult or summat .. Neville 👍
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Shout it, say it quietly, repeatedly. No means NO. I loved every line. I’ll be sure to check out your catalogue.
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Read Morespellbinding in an aloof moodnot suited for others companysilently casting on the windchanting internallylet this song be hearda daisy of affectiona dash of hope to landprotection hinder not the way of loveinteresting asylum, enchanted hearts under a vowseeking redemption...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously I appreciate you ❤️
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Mystic and beautifully written. The ending verses reminds me somehow of the movie The crow. “)
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thank you graciously dearest ME though I’ve never seen the movie ❤️
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Read MoreFor years I felt I deserved whatever Karma had in store for me The physical pain, the sleepless nights, the troubles in the horizon For every mirror I broke I joked seven more were added to the curse When I reflected on...
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. I too have been there before brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I think as we grow older and see things in a different way, we come to understand our selves more. Glad this resonated with you.
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Read MoreHere comes the man of mirrorsThe mirrors on the man mirroring the roomWith the furniture having a conversationA painting on the wall:A horse trampling a bouquette of flowers Horses in me, and out of me, trampling the soul. A hand of...
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hello dearest ME I myself don’t know where my poems come from this a great glance into your soul ❤️
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I believe my poems are a part of me. They come from my subconscious. 🙂
Thank you my friend for reading and support! Highly apprecited! <3
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Thank you, Damian! Highly appreciated “)
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This is a hell of a write, my friend — very powerful; but I see a typo, I think, when you wrote, “In a battle of write and earse” when I believe that last word should be “erase,” yes?
Also, you may not be aware of the big LISTEN button that now lives on this page and no doubt many more of yours as well as many others who labour but are not aware of our unwanted AI reader who has hitch-hiked on the work of everyone who has not attached the #excludetx tag to their work.
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Thank you brother for reading and the comment. Also for both the correction and exclude tag. I appreciate it! “)
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This is quite mind-blowing.
I admire the punchy and reflective lines through each stanza.
I can sense this is a personal piece, it describes an emotional journey taking place.
It is enlightening and tragic at the same time.
A pleasure to take in. x
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Thank you, Rosie C! It means so much to me. It is indeed a personal piece. “)
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Dude…This is a kick ass piece. Your writings always intrigue me.
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Thank you, Keith! Highly appreciated. “)
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That carries a stark rhythm, the triple negation (“no man shall endure nor beast”) gives it a biblical, almost covenantal tone. The phrase “monstrous loneliness” works well because it personifies isolation as something with appetite and form. Appreciate you.
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Thank you PAR for reading and the feedback! I appreciate you as well. “)
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A great mystery unfolds. The nature of the muse.
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Thank you, Knight! I appreciate ir. “)
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write per usual my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian