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Read MoreContinued… Alayna came back. She was to be my first appointment that morning and throughout the night before at home in bed, I thought about her. All of her. Her feel, her taste, and that spark of a crush. A...
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Thought it would be a nice twist to the storyline, haha!
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Damn harsh ending. This was steamy, and the read was quick. I really enjoyed it
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Thanks. Unhappy endings can be the best endings to a story, haha. Steamy and quick is a great combination of course for erotica, hehe.
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Read MoreI was sick of it now I'm done with it tired of the rush, rush, rush I've given enough to people who are lazy fucks outrageous expectations working 7 days a week they act like I'm a machine one that doesn't get weak and tired, frustrated, angry asking me...
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This is fucking great! Love it. Can totally relate.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Honest fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m conflicted, I don’t know whether to feel happy or sad that I can relate. Great ink, Nick.
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The picture you painted here is spot on, and wow, written so well. Nick
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Read MoreI had always heard, mainly from my two older brothers, that one should never get married. Be a player and own your freedom. These words echo still as I have no children and no ex-wife—my own life and liberty....
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I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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More indeed! The build-up is essential in erotica – anticipation heightens the pleasure! And thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be focusing on erotica for a while now as I enjoy writing it.
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I agree about build-up, Daniel, but don’t make it too interminably long like some writers on Inkitt – readers like me will soon get bored and lose interest. That’s why I’m successfully writing flash fiction now – quick thrills for all + instant reaction = fun! fun! fun! xx
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Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.
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Read MoreAfter a long conversationWhere we could understand each otherI thought to myselfIt is niceI can connectThen a shade of pleasure passed over my face.
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Always dig your observations my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreMy skin hurts. It feels like they're ripping it off my bones—sliver by sliver. I can't scream anymore. My voice left me an hour after they started. They said that once it's done, I'll be a changed person. Yeah,...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling my friend. This is really good. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Sexy & well written. Nice work Fia.
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Thank you Vision 😊
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Powerful work. You bring this to vivid life.
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Sensational, Daniel! Role reversal at her most punishing! xx