Fantastic work.

I am not a bot ✅
I can converse ✅

Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brilliant .. sums it up perfectly .. Neville

This is fantastic poetry writing my friend! Gritty, strong, like a shot of whiskey. Colorful, great story telling, and imagery. Great work.

John

Waw raw and I can see the imagery in this.

Goldenmyst said it accurately. I concur wholeheartedly.
But, thunderbird? My god, man. At the least Seagrams 7 !!! LOL
This is very good writing. A bullseye on a dartboard of a swanky bar life.
Awesome.

Outstanding and real. Nice work.

Thank you.

I love how you wove it all together into a cohesive story. There’s an underlying homage to the women and their fire and marks left on you that ties this all together so beautifully. I can’t help but think you made a difference in their existence as well. Fire water or no, this one is brilliant

Thank you. I appreciate you.

It’s beautiful and fantastic, Elke..

Thank you for this kind. comment, my friend! 🙏

Beautifully penned, Elke. Excellent storytelling my friend, with such a positive message. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very positive and uplifting story.

The message, the story & the beauty pours out deeply into my heart. Am marvelous journey with such an exquisite writer.

I like the way you used the age intertwined with what is happening to you.

A goody

Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Damian.

That is sweet. Can you imagine your heart beating hoping it was from that person.

I once found a folded up love poem along the side of a road. Perhaps someone has thrown it out the car window.
It was actually written really well. I wrote a reply to it, although I had no idea who wrote the first one, or who it was to. I just felt like it deserved an answer. Too bad they never knew that a writer had found their poem. It wasn’t written for nothing after all.
Your little poem here brings back that memory for me. So thank you for your poem, it too has meaning to us readers.