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Read MoreTock tockHelloCan youCan youI want to hear about herCan you talk me about the moon?
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Thank you Damian.
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Read MoreDaily and nightly,there was a garden.The one we went to as kids.Where we left everything as it was. We used to go to the beach as time pass.Everything stays right where you left it.It shows your inner strength. When you arrive...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I’ve always been a fan of your musings. This one does not disappoint. Nicely done. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Thank you for sharing your musings with us!
Life comes without a safety net. To think that we have control is an illusion. But everyone of us has a reliable inner compass knowing what’s right or wrong and guiding us. It’s called intuition, and we can trust it. It’s your tour guide while climbing mountains. It won’t lead you astray.-
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Thank you, Sappho, I love how you said that intuition is my tour guide. Put a smile on my face.
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If one tries, that is success…well done, Fia.
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Thank you, Atticus;))
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The first line is amazing, gripping. The rest of the poem builds well. I’m a minimalist. The first line can hold its own.
Regards James-
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Thank you. I often write a line and let it sit and see where it goes.
Thank you. Knight
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Chère F.,
I don’t wonder/care why your.work resonates so deep with me; I am happy that it does.
This is another one to be grateful for.I am sure you are familiar with the: use it or lose it thing?
It’s not applicable for muscles alone! I truly believe that.
My wish for you is to use it a lot!
Warm greetings, Gus-
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Aww thank you Gus:))
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A though provoking piece! Well done, Fia! “)
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Thank you, M.E;))
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dont think about … keep fighting
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I’m a fighter. I have things to be done Sam. lol Thank you;))
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The world needs fighters who will stand for things that are right. Of course you get tired, but if the spirit is strong, the strength will come.
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Thank you, Sam. I’m a fighter;))
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Read MoreHere comes the man of mirrorsThe mirrors on the man mirroring the roomWith the furniture having a conversationA painting on the wall:A horse trampling a bouquette of flowers Horses in me, and out of me, trampling the soul. A hand of...
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hello dearest ME I myself don’t know where my poems come from this a great glance into your soul ❤️
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I believe my poems are a part of me. They come from my subconscious. 🙂
Thank you my friend for reading and support! Highly apprecited! <3
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Thank you, Damian! Highly appreciated “)
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This is a hell of a write, my friend — very powerful; but I see a typo, I think, when you wrote, “In a battle of write and earse” when I believe that last word should be “erase,” yes?
Also, you may not be aware of the big LISTEN button that now lives on this page and no doubt many more of yours as well as many others who labour but are not aware of our unwanted AI reader who has hitch-hiked on the work of everyone who has not attached the #excludetx tag to their work.
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Thank you brother for reading and the comment. Also for both the correction and exclude tag. I appreciate it! “)
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This is quite mind-blowing.
I admire the punchy and reflective lines through each stanza.
I can sense this is a personal piece, it describes an emotional journey taking place.
It is enlightening and tragic at the same time.
A pleasure to take in. x
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Thank you, Rosie C! It means so much to me. It is indeed a personal piece. “)
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Dude…This is a kick ass piece. Your writings always intrigue me.
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Thank you, Keith! Highly appreciated. “)
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That carries a stark rhythm, the triple negation (“no man shall endure nor beast”) gives it a biblical, almost covenantal tone. The phrase “monstrous loneliness” works well because it personifies isolation as something with appetite and form. Appreciate you.
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Thank you PAR for reading and the feedback! I appreciate you as well. “)
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A great mystery unfolds. The nature of the muse.
Regards James-
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Thank you, Knight! I appreciate ir. “)
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Read MorePlanting a kissover your heart,our love blossomed.  The roots of our pastgrew distant,deep into your soul.  This memory shared,like two vines tangling,blossoming roses of love.  This fire,loosening our guardbefore our clothes.  This love-making,two hearts melting,then molding to one.  Beneath a damp sheet,this bodytangles with...
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent observation my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian