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I admire the ease with which you express your inner world. Stoic, melancholy, honest and beautiful write. You are there in every word, thank you for the share!
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Read MoreI am on fucking firefrom the top of my head to the bottom of my feetThe fire started from withinBlood drips from every openingSizzling the moment, it hits outer skinI want to cryBut I can notI screamed so loudyou...
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Great write Fia.
I think we’d agree we aren’t our bodies.
Somewhere in the spaces between our cells , our atoms, is our consciousness…but that’s not us either.
We cling to our notion of self but really are non self.Nothing.-
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Thank you, Peter that is a profound statement. I believe we are more.
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Phenomenally penned, Fia. This was a powerful write my friend, I think our soul is our mind. It makes sense to me anyways. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That is definitely a thought. Thank you Damian
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The Heart & Soul is everything to a person’s existence. The brain is just there to put it into words. Great piece Fia. xo
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Love the wordplay and phrasing my friend. Nice flow as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! Thank you for your kind words as always.
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Awesome poem. The words and rhymes are acidic!
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Thank you Visions 🙏
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Thank you Mary!
And you inspire me to keep writing with compliments like that!
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Read MoreYou wanted me to be good I tried, really, I did Is being good something in one’s DNA? Once the door closes The lock is in place The shred of goodness is decimated I see you and the energy around you Red and pulsating Need radiating from...
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Damn, Fia. This write burns hotter than a thousand suns my friend. I’d need to build an Igloo just to cool down after reading this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nice. Love that comment, Damian. Appreciate it
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Mmmm!!!! Yes Fia, I do enjoy a nice toy 😉 this was spicy and positively delicious. Keep em cummin!!
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That is the goal girl. Yes, you do the same ❤️
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Sizzling hot!!!!!!!!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXO
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Ooo, thank you 😊 Keith xoxo
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SUCK
BIG LIKE
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Thank you, PoetSpeak 😊
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Introspective write, Daniel. Very powerful spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian