-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Fia Naturie wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreThere is nothing like the feeling I get on FridayThe minute I think of the word, it’s like a switch goes offFriday is freedomFriday is sweet abandonFriday makes me feel sultry and decadentWhat is it about the day?Every Friday...
12 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Naaj ;))
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. You always know how to kick off a Friday, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Damian. Friday is a thing for me.
-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Friday’s Rule! Sunday Nights SUCK! Great poem Fia..xo
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
You are so right, Keith 😊
-
-
![Profile picture of twofiftythree]()
ya love a friday. good write
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Yes, I do. Thank you Ambjr ;))
-
-
![Profile picture of inechoingsilence]()
Fridays represent freedom, in my opinion. As one who observes the Sabbath, by Friday an hour or two before sunset, all my electronics (phone, laptop) are off. I am unreachable all of Friday night through Saturday evening, and that freedom is intoxicating. All I do for those hours is spend time catching up with family and friends, pray, and enjoy homecooked food that I made with my family. Conversely, Friday nights also mean a chance to care for oneself – whether going out and getting your groove on or staying home in pjs and Netflix. I do like this a lot, as it leaves ample room for personal interpretation. <3 Echo
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you inechoingsilence. These are very good things to do on a Friday. Appreciate it 😊
-
-
![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
Fridays are for fucking. It’s just that simple. Someone frequently comes in from Tuscaloosa – and it’s on. There’s the rest of the weekend to recover… maybe.
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
That is a classic line “Friday is for Fucking.” Love it. Dk <3
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreShe had these little cupsof coffee for eyes, and Ishould have stayed upall night.Love is a drunk whore.A lie from Saturn.Venus, slither back in theocean where you belong.Loneliness is a knife cuttingmy balls off.Knowledge arrived with analarm clock from...
9 Comments-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
From the first line to the last, I was caught up in this
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thanks, Willow.
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Thomas. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thanks
-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Outstanding poem Thomas. Love it!!
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you.
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you.
-
![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
I love the vague references and allusions, the metaphorical array of madness and symbolism. You can certainly feel the missteps and empathize with the devastation. As with all good poetry, I can read this in several different ways.
It’s a piece that keeps calling you back, Thomas… like a final glance behind you at a beautiful woman passing by.
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you. I appreciate it.
-
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Amethyste wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreI like to do it with youSleeping with youIs like honey that melts in the mouth.Suddenly all my desire for sex returns.
10 Comments-
![Profile picture of Poetspeak]()
Sex with you is great ….
BIG LIKE
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
You made me smile. Thank you.
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Outstanding piece. I like to do it with you as well. Let me know when there will be another time.
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Thank you for both. 🙂 I did not understand what you meant by another time.
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Another time meaning the sex.
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Sex poetry you mean or me & you?
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Sex poetry.
-
-
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Ok I will let you know. 🙂 Thanks.
-
![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
Take it like a taker. I’m a Giver.
… Chappell Roan -
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Thank you.
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Fia Naturie and
NAAJIR are now friends
![]()
![Profile Photo]()
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
M.E wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreIn this cafe, with dirt for wallpaper. The heat is a bitch, and the fan in the ceiling is the worst— turning counter-clockwise. Sipping on my cup of coffee and milk. Too many flies, buzzing, fighting over throne, fighting over food, fighting over fly-chicks. Whatever they are fighting for— only that...
20 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Sounds hot and sticky. A summer day.
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
A hot and lonesome summer day. “)
Thank you, Fia!
-
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
Chewing gum, or strawberry. My favorite flavors since childhood. 😀
Thank you, Adira! Your comments make my day! “)
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
I swear I know these moments. Drags & weighs the body down. This is a doozy
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
Yeah. I am sorry you can relate to this. Thanks, willlow for reading! “)
-
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
Thats what it was called back then. “)
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, M.E. Relatable write my friend, we’ve all been there. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
Thank you brother! Highly appreciated! “)
-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Don’t want to be there but you forced me in this place with your detailed writing. DAMN GOOD! If you want an ice cream cone, go to Dampkitten’s poem “Poetspeak Sweet”. There you’ll find an ice cream cone and a whole lot more.
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
I apologize. It got to be written and vented. Thank you for reading and liking it! “)
Hmm..I’ll check it out rn. Thanks “)
-
![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
Yeah, they have bubble gum ice cream, and it’s gross. Also, have you tried the cotton candy green seedless grapes? My God, they taste just like it. Weird.
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
Bubble gum flavour id gross! I disagree. But hearing of cotton candy green seedless grapes, I think you are right about the bubble gum flavour in there. Hahaha.
-
-
![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
LOL… I thought you were referencing my poem from the beginning. And now, I find out you like strawberry ice cream. OMG. By the way, is this ‘mosquito wing’ phrase an allusion to Smells Like Teen Spirit?
You do realize that you could enter this poem in the ‘coffee’ poem contest don’t you?
You will find this extremely weird, but the imagery in your piece is very reminiscent of the hotel scene early in the movie, Apocalypse Now.
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
Lol. I saw your poem after our fellow poet: visions_of_insanity’s recommendation for ice cream. It ended up another type of ice cream. Lol
No. But I liked the reference. I had another poem that I have lost, where I referenced Nirvana’s Smells like teen spirit.
Mosquito’s wings here symbolize inferiority. For their tiny wings comparing with flies. Idk why it came to my mind. But I used it.I didn’t know about the contest. The setting of this poem is in a cafe but the themes has nothing to do with coffee.
I don’t remember this scene. I think I’ll rewatch it one day.
Thank you for reading and for the comments, DK. “)
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work, my friend.
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
Thank you, Thomas! “)
-
-
![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
Holy Shit, you won! Congratulations, M.E!
Now, you see where mosquito wings can carry you!-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
Mosquito wings comes with mosquito responsiblities. The limitless ability of sucking. Hahaha
Thank you, DK! “)
-
-
![Profile picture of Jacob erin-cilberto]()
Damn mosquito…no chance with all those flies, just keep them off my ice cream cone.
This is so powerful in its imagery…and such a disgusting place…I think I will get my cone to go.j.
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
Thank you Jacob! Appreciated. “)
-
-
- Load More Posts
Some Fridays can lead into a sexy Saturday morn…press repeat!
Haha…diggin this vibe
Blessings
Naaj