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Read MoreOnce upon a time there was a moon.It glowed brightly.It went down and the sunshine showed up soon. And they shared the light daily and nightly.The moon said,you make me shine.The bond they shared all this time. But the sun said,don't...
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Read MorePrecious, yet brittle like a fiddle. Delicate, frail, alas cracked in the middle. Riddled by plagues, plagued by a riddle. Critically acclaimed yet worshipped by little.Pill popper's delight. Stage fright amongst a plethora of other might be reason why...
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Thank you for reading/listening!
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian!
I’m so happy you like it! 🙏🏻
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This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.
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Thank you so much Fia!
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Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”You have some great lines in this piece.
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Thank you so much DK ❤️
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Read MoreMy mind escapes my thoughtsThe waves crashAs I burnThe ocean coolsSerenity is what I yearnThe tide comes inAs I go outThe air filled with hopeI scream, no one hears me shoutA pleasant day here on the shoreI'm steeped in...
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Powerful work. Excellent.
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Appreciate the comments Thomas, Thanks!!
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Absolutely beautiful poetry.
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Hello Alexandria. Thank you!!
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Yesssss! The ocean is the cure. Beautiful homage to nature’s healing powers.
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Always the cure. Thanks Pinkdreams.
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Beautifully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Read MoreWhat happened to your bodyYou used to be so good lookingIt looks like a storm ripped through your eyesLike you were rung out to dryPasty, dry skinSagging, paint peelingWhat?No shitCrystal Meth?That shit tore you upYou look like you've been...
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When you look
Almost
Alive
Are definetly
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I don’t know who said it but I know that I heard it somewhere. Thanks PAR.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Addiction will take everything a person was or ever will be. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Absolutely. It wears you down till you have nothing left in you. Thanks my friend.
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Read MoreYelling cursing, noise level terrorThen he hits herShe criesThings get quiet, then it starts againLocked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bedThat's the place he goes when they go at itMother & Alien,...
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Excellent work.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Damian.
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Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…