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    The sad state of things.

    As though a nearby pond has dried up,I've lost something (in writing). I used to look out the window.I'd get ideas and write them down. Now...all I see are houses and maybea new fence. My self-title of poetry man is asking...talk to...

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    • Don’t be afraid of the silence.
      Talent is permanent and you have it.
      We all dry up for a while .

    • Powerfully penned, Tim. We all go through those spells my friend, it’s the life of a writer it seems. Be patient with your muse, sometimes they get fickle, but usually come around when it’s time. Hang in there brother. Maybe this write can help you start to break through the barrier. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you, ntd. Welcome to the site.

    • Silence can be deafening when we’re used to words and inspiration. The world is heavy right now, pressing down on creativity. I always find that not trying to look at it directly has a better chance of making contact again with the muse. I’ve been here, it is scary indeed

    • Well I for one am glad you are back. For two, writing tends to play hide and seek.
      Eventually it will tag you amigo!
      Don’t stress about the dry spell.
      Enjoy life and the day to day stuff we take for granted.
      Inspiration just might be found there two.

      Hang in there buddy!

    • When I am stumped, I read several different pieces from a few writers that continue to inspire me. It usually works.
      Yet, we all have that lull of course. It’s a breather from the mental tasking perhaps? At any rate, you will find a moment I am sure, to share a gem of yours with us. Hang tough!

    • Every poet hits that dry pond sooner or later—the mud cracks, the frogs go quiet, and you think the water’s gone for good.
      But the fact you’re scared of the silence tells me the well’s still yours—it’s just waiting on rain.

    • Tim, I too have been through this. I believe your gift is still as strong as ever, it was just waiting for the right moment to resurface. You never lose the muse. This poem itself is an example of how you can take an emotion or feeling and make it into art.

      John

      • I’ve been going through a dry spell for years. Every once in a while a poem whispers in my ear. Thanks for the comment, John.

    • Wow awesome. As the person said Don’t be afraid of the silence, I know it can be scary but it won’t hurt you. I personally learned to deal with it and eventually you will too.

      Great work

    • It’s sad but beautiful words too. Sometimes there is no words to express. Except the silence around you. In silence our eyes see enough inspiration around us when there’s no sound , no voice in a small spot. Good write..Keep it up 🤗

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    Vulnerable

    There is rumour in the city Cars are passing Lights are shining It is loud in my head I feel vulnerable And I miss you.

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  • Spellbook

    I have a magical book here on my desk.It can chase away any rat or pest.A spellbook,ancient divine. Kept intact all this time.It has so many spells,and so many pages.The pages,yellow. The words,old.And yet,the spells work like a charm.And it doesn't...

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    Debating the Sky

    I remember Dad behind the wheel,elbows out, arm resting on the window,eyebrows furrowed, eyes darting,hands twitching in rhythmwith invisible opponents.He often said on the Los Angeles freeway,shaking his head and rubbing his eyes,“Boys, I can't see a damn thing.”Five...

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    • We can all relate to traffic being a rat race. I have always dreaded big city interstates.
      One wrong move and you are stuck there for hours. And that’s if you are lucky.
      Something about this write makes me wonder if my boys ever studied me in traffic when they were younger.
      I enjoyed the read.

    • Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent write, you’re such a natural storyteller and are able with your amazing imagery to make me feel like I’m watching from the backseat my friend. A great read brother, nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • That silent observation of internal conversations is such a profound moment. Terrified in the backseat…I often feel that way about life these days. I have a friend whose grandmother used to drive us around in the backseat of her old green paneled station wagon, having full conversations in her head. But her half was audible. We never knew when she was addressing us or them. Took me back to those rides with this.

    • This took me back a good few years .. or yonks as we say this side of the pond .. thanks for the ride Thomas .. Neville

    • I couldn’t help but think of an old neighbor I had when I was young. He would drive me and his son and daughter to school up the street. Thank God it wasn’t far. He would talk as though we weren’t there and every once in a while hit the brake when someone pulled up to the corner of a street waiting to pull out. I couldn’t wait to get out. 🙂 Great story, Thomas.

    • Thanks. I appreciate it.

    • What a grand and deeply emotional memory of your Dad at the wheel with all his inner angst haunting him while you his passengers held on for dear life. Truly a great ride of a freeway poem that made for an exhilarating read. Enjoyed this journey through time and the highway. You painted an exquisite portrait of your Dad here my friend.

      John

    • Thank you. Much appreciated.

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    Stars

    He had a soft voice He talked about moon and stars It was like love making I kept thinking of taking off his clothes Taking his dick in my mouth And licking it It would make justice To the warmth his nocturnal voice Was giving to my...

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