I love the second Stanza.

so lovely dearest Daniel I love the juxtaposition of the raven and angel wings 💕

Beautifully penned, Daniel. Another amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

powerful write lovely poetess 💕

Wow! I thoroughly, thoroughly enjoyed this pose Paula. It’s new, fresh, and edgy. Thanks for sharing.
Jackie 👍🏻

Lol i meant to write Prose❤️

666 baby. Always & forever! xxx

Thanks everyone.

Even though this is not finished, it packs a punch. Very good you two

Thanks!

Short and tender

Thank you Fia.

Aww, to have that smell linger in your mind. Good write

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Being an alcoholic has levels and rabbit holes, only problem is trying to navigate through the quicksand that one is slowly sinking in. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I never had a desire to drink but my mother did. I guess some people are prone to addictions then others. This is a gritty down and out poem, but always interesting when coming from your pen, Thomas.

Real, raw, treacherous, daring. Awesome!! Love this piece!

Thank you, Tim.

Thank heaven for that marriage between the sun and that trash .. Write on brother .. Neville 😎👍

Thanks, my friend.