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Read MoreI watch themwitness them on streetsbenchestrains their heads in the cloudsfloatingtheir eyes compelledto stare intocell phone screenssoaking up dopaminelike hummingbirdshovering above nectar they roam like cloudsfrom here to thereseemingly unawareof buildingsof traffic until they've slipped byout of sight replacedby other clouds
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Yes, Exactly. Thank you, J.
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Remember when just finding change for the pay phone was the goal to call someone. Now its like your always reachable. No one disconnects. Nice poem
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I remember those good old days well. lol Thanks you, Fia. 🙂
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Tim. Dig the nostalgic flavor of this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate all the comments, Damian. I’ll be by your way soon. 🙂
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The want and the holding back are tormenting. Nicely done
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Thank you SeaCat!
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Read MoreConstruction Zone pleased to meet you but I already forgot your name my heart has not forgotten you and the massive surgery done to its feelings a transplant has brought new love so, you may move on like a patient done with rehab I will remember your name...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for yur kind comment, Damian.
j.
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“I already forgotten your name. my heart has not forgotten you.” That is an Aww line. Nice
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thank you for the kind comment, Fia.
Encouraging site this is.
j.
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I don’t know but I do know how you’ve always managed to make me want to eat your words so I could digest a few and muchly increase my own writing!! I know: tis an impossibility. Unless a small bribe would help!
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I would take the bribe, em. But you don’t need to do that…your vocabulary tops mine any day…and when I read your poetry, I want to hide mine.
Thank you for the kind comment, nevertheless….ha, “nevertheless,” what an odd word.
j.
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Laughing because I’ve oft wondered about that word or – is it a perversion!
By the way, we’re not going to argue about who’s the best, sir.. I, a mere woman, wouldn’t dare! More than probably.. .. .. ..
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Nope we are NOT going to argue….I have stated my theory.
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Fantastic work. Great to see you here, my friend.
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Thanks Thomas.
j.
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Most on cell phones being anywhere else besides where they actually are.
j.