-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreIn a camp not far from hereOn the other side of the lakeEverything burnt downNothing left but the ruins Night has fallen, Light the firewoodGather all the children, Raise Your ShearsIcarus burns, As Cronus feedsThe Awakening, The Conjuring Faceless creatures with...
8 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Awesome! Check the film out. A young Jason Alexander from Seinfeld is in the film. Thanks M.E
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
The end alone makes the hair on my neck rise.
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Cool! Thanks Fia!
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Look up the documentary called Cropsey. It’s a true story about a guy named Andre Rand who worked at a notorious state school that was supposed to take care of children with mental disabilities called Willowbrook. Instead, through corruption, it allowed them to be abused in the worst way.
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
YES! Familiar with Cropsey. Great doc. Thanks for the info & feedback.
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend you always deliver. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Thanks man. You rock!!!
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreWhat the hell is this place?Elitist PsychotherapyPseudo Science sorceryInto the beyondWhat's the shape of her rage?Psychoplasmic therapyAnother Theater of PainFamily Tree Reborn Beaten to death, covered in bloodThey came without warning Demonic cratures uncagedManifest through inner rageDeformed children retaliateHammer Smashes FaceRabid...
4 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This has unbidden murderous intent. This is a good piece
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Thank you Fia. Appreciate it
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Thanks man.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you
-
-
-
![Profile picture of RPM]()
RPM wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreShe steps from the showera vision of warmth and water and light. Steam still clinging to her skin,drops tracing paths down her shoulders,the air itself seems to hush for her.That towel, drawn so tight to guard her beauty.Shapes that...
7 Comments-
![Profile picture of Sam Nash]()
They are usually the reason we ever learned what longing means.. and the reason we write about it… beautiful
-
![Profile picture of RPM]()
Thank you p, Sam. Grateful for your comments.
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
This is so excellent. I’m really glad I read it, thanks for posting.
This particular stanza didn’t read smooth. If I may suggest…
That towel, is drawn tight
to guard her beauty.
His hands still remember
the soft curve shapes of her lovely breasts,
the gentle hollow where shadows meet.Great writing.
-
![Profile picture of RPM]()
Thanks for reading, and for your thoughtful analysis,Tim. I appreciate your constructive criticism very much.
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
My pleasure. 🙂 Awesome poem.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Neville]()
Incredible ink .. and so perfectly spilled ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
-
![Profile picture of RPM]()
Thanks, Nev!
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
Paula Jobi wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreSO YOU WANT MORE? (This is a sequel/part two to both...BODY PAINT TIME and THE NEW TENANT). I bring together my agoraphobic neighbor Mags (Body Paint Time) and Jaz (The New Tenant) - Enjoy the sex! -------- The day after Jaz moved...
- Load More Posts
What a write! Now, I want to watch the movie.