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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Why?

Poetry

May 27, 2025

4

Why doesn't the night apologize?Because stars don't come down to concrete!Because the steps are lost without a name... Why do eyes close and no one sees?Why does the wind speak and no one listens?Because hunger weighs more than silence! Why does...

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4 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, PAR. Like the depth of this write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Appreciate you back!
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  For me this started out soft then built up to an emotional break down. Really good Par
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you my dear.
Liziantus-Marantus wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

The Glowing Moon

Biographies & Memoirs, Poetry, Short Stories, Uncategorized

May 27, 2025

0

Once upon a time there was a moon.It glowed brightly.It went down and the sunshine showed up soon. And they shared the light daily and nightly.The moon said,you make me shine.The bond they shared all this time. But the sun said,don't...

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Drieks wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

A Sight to Withhold

Audio & Video, Poetry

May 27, 2025

8

Precious, yet brittle like a fiddle. Delicate, frail, alas cracked in the middle. Riddled by plagues, plagued by a riddle. Critically acclaimed yet worshipped by little.Pill popper's delight. Stage fright amongst a plethora of other might be reason why...

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8 Comments
- S. Libellule
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…
  - Drieks
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you for reading/listening!
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Drieks
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you so much Damian!
    I’m so happy you like it! 🙏🏻
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.
  - Drieks
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you so much Fia!
- DampKitten
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Love this couplet
  “Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
  Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”
  
  You have some great lines in this piece.
  - Drieks
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you so much DK ❤️
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Relax the mind

Poetry

May 27, 2025

8

My mind escapes my thoughtsThe waves crashAs I burnThe ocean coolsSerenity is what I yearnThe tide comes inAs I go outThe air filled with hopeI scream, no one hears me shoutA pleasant day here on the shoreI'm steeped in...

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8 Comments
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerful work. Excellent.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Appreciate the comments Thomas, Thanks!!
- Alexandria
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Absolutely beautiful poetry.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Hello Alexandria. Thank you!!
- Pinkdreams
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Yesssss! The ocean is the cure. Beautiful homage to nature’s healing powers.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Always the cure. Thanks Pinkdreams.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you Damian.
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