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Appreciate you back!
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For me this started out soft then built up to an emotional break down. Really good Par
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Thank you my dear.
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Read MoreOnce upon a time there was a moon.It glowed brightly.It went down and the sunshine showed up soon. And they shared the light daily and nightly.The moon said,you make me shine.The bond they shared all this time. But the sun said,don't...
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Read MorePrecious, yet brittle like a fiddle. Delicate, frail, alas cracked in the middle. Riddled by plagues, plagued by a riddle. Critically acclaimed yet worshipped by little.Pill popper's delight. Stage fright amongst a plethora of other might be reason why...
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Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…
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Thank you for reading/listening!
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian!
I’m so happy you like it! 🙏🏻
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This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.
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Thank you so much Fia!
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Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”You have some great lines in this piece.
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Thank you so much DK ❤️
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Read MoreMy mind escapes my thoughtsThe waves crashAs I burnThe ocean coolsSerenity is what I yearnThe tide comes inAs I go outThe air filled with hopeI scream, no one hears me shoutA pleasant day here on the shoreI'm steeped in...
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Powerful work. Excellent.
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Appreciate the comments Thomas, Thanks!!
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Absolutely beautiful poetry.
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Hello Alexandria. Thank you!!
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Yesssss! The ocean is the cure. Beautiful homage to nature’s healing powers.
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Always the cure. Thanks Pinkdreams.
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Beautifully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Powerfully penned, PAR. Like the depth of this write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian