Daniel Long

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July 31, 2025

There’s a hole in the ceiling That feeds this chill in the air Getting hooked on a feeling Slightly dizzy yet still aware Dark figures sway in misery Forced to watch them play Chaos clouds our periphery Calloused thoughts in decay Shiny prize contains a hook That’s how...

5 Comments

Willow
1 year ago

You keep hitting them out of the park. And I go flying with that ball every time! Gotta watch that hook…it’s a killer. Another thought provoking, rile-me-up piece, my friend
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I always swing for the fences! I am good at having that effect on you. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Tim
1 year ago

This reminds me of social media’s control over youth. They can’t think for themselves anymore being they’re led and pulled in by algorhithms. Good one Damian.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Oh, technology has its flaws indeed. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Damian DeadLove
1 year ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on. Appreciate you.

Damian