Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.

Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
j.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…

Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability

“Mashed tantrum”….I really like that turn of phrase….

Jacob…
You know, I’m not a particular fan of political poetry, which is why I so enjoyed this piece… especially the logical way you follow the trail to the purloined invitations.
Vol

smells and images merged into a visceral statement about the world

Regards James

thank you for your kind comment, James.
j.

This is one of those pieces that has the soul crying & the mind sighing. So true & so disheartening. This world is at the edge of a cliff & too many just aren’t willing to take that step back. Lemmings…

Watching is good but being caught is better.
Terrific succinct and titillating piece.
😜