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Read MoreMirror of the World (Short Story) The smell of ripe fruit was in the air, when the wandering dervish entered the small village. On that hot summer day he was looking forward to a cooling drink of water from the common...
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Thank you very much for your kind comment dear Fía! You are rightn – living together in harmony could be so easy if we treated everyone the way we want to be treated ourselves.
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Ich liebe es, Elke! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Vielen Dank für deinen wundervollen Kommentar, Daniel. Support from a great writer like you means a lot to me!
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Beautifully penned, Elke. You’re a gifted storyteller my friend, really enjoyed this. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I bow to you with gratitude for your appreciation and encouragement dear Damian👃
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Such a sweet and uplifting tale.
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Thank you very much for reading and writing such a lovely comment, my friend!
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An excellent story, to remember.
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Thank you very much, dear Adàgio!
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I enjoy fables, folk tales, fantasy and the like, and so I enjoyed this quite a lot. I wish this dervish could visit all around the world and teach people to behave better.
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Yes you are right, Sam! The earth could be a wonderful place, if we worked together and took good care of one another and the whole planet.
Thank you very much for reading and commenting!
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Read MoreHow can I miss you? When you never go away Water’s wet sky is blue Perpetual victim falls prey Outside in the distance A stranger lies in wait Steeped in persistence Always guarding the gate When did I get wise? Is the proper question As soon as a crow...
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Dear D,
You still got it. An incredible meter. Made me want to sing this. The imagery played in my head of a dark bus stop. Why? No clue. But the players in this piece for me, were intertwined. Trying to run but wanting to stay. I have a longer version running in my head but I’ll spare you the directors cut😊
Wonderful write. H🌷-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I sometimes have that effect, it’s just the lyricist in me. lol. I always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha great end there, friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked it as well. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Anything is on the table, maybe even spoken word. Never say never. The song I’m working on, I literally had to start writing lyrics to it. None of the old words were fitting the vibe. Also, I haven’t tried to write a song for many summers now. I kinda forgot sometimes the music leads the dance. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I remember this piece. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoy it now. Nice Damian.;))
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool! Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Something tells me this is so good .. I got a foot that can’t stop tapping .. 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWine Bearer of the Caravanserai Her eyes peer like mirror poolsIn the garden of the Taj MahalWhere the light of her soul shimmersIn reflections of the stars in the skyOn the forever bend of the moonbeam Silk RoadLeading like a...
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Somewhere history and romance meet. A finely penned travel…thanks for the drink!
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Thank you so much Benjamin! This is the first poem of the romantic historical quality I have written this year. I am very grateful for your words.
John
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Read More“In the beginning everybody was eating and talking shitBut one of the girls attitude was taking it too far and would not quit, “Everyone was naked and relaxed, but she would not calm downSlowly I made my way...
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That was an intense meal. No need to ask for seconds, right? She is done.
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In more ways than one.
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Read Moredreamy thoughts with visions of sadnesswatching her before medancing in the wind wild hair flowingwith delicate shades of blue she exudesgentle with my feelingsshe comes to visit oftentender girl with a soft voicemelanchly haunt a little slip of a...
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Broken childhoods can still turn into beautiful things. The Japanese call it the art of kintsugi 🌼
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hello dearest Joe yes they can I don’t feel sadness is my enemy but teacher thank you for the lovely comment 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here 💕
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This is sweet and insightful. If only people could see the reflection in the mirror. Do onto others as you would like them to do onto you. (I remember some school teaching)