Powerfully penned, Keith. There are dangers everywhere, clever write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Yes, hanging is not a game at all. It is quite uncomfortable in fact. Interesting write.

A thought provoking poem, dear Keith! The curiosity of young people is needed to explore and understand this world. But sometimes we underestimate the fact that children often don’t think about possible consequences of their actions, while they are engaged in making new experiences. Meaningful and important work, my friend!

Wham. You nailed it.

Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is a powerful, deeply moving piece, my friend! Too many people confuse the claim to possess somebody with love. Love blooms only in freedom and mutual respect! Especially the sentence ‘I hate you for loving mé’ cuts like a knife.

Phenomenally penned, Keith. Clever write my friend. They might also work as flotation devices as well. Appreciate you.

Damian

“hoping you still see something redeemable in me” That is powerful, crimsin

Magnificent write Brenda. The sadness of this piece lured me in.

Brilliantly penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

As I read I am “tumbling through the centuries” with you. A ghost, witnessing with no power to save. Your writing never disappoints, fantastic piece!

a very interesting tale most birds mate for life human birds do not sadly and will sometimes get bored and fly away…great write ❤️