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Read MoreContinued… Alayna came back. She was to be my first appointment that morning and throughout the night before at home in bed, I thought about her. All of her. Her feel, her taste, and that spark of a crush. A...
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Thought it would be a nice twist to the storyline, haha!
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Damn harsh ending. This was steamy, and the read was quick. I really enjoyed it
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Thanks. Unhappy endings can be the best endings to a story, haha. Steamy and quick is a great combination of course for erotica, hehe.
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Read MoreI had always heard, mainly from my two older brothers, that one should never get married. Be a player and own your freedom. These words echo still as I have no children and no ex-wife—my own life and liberty....
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I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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More indeed! The build-up is essential in erotica – anticipation heightens the pleasure! And thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be focusing on erotica for a while now as I enjoy writing it.
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I agree about build-up, Daniel, but don’t make it too interminably long like some writers on Inkitt – readers like me will soon get bored and lose interest. That’s why I’m successfully writing flash fiction now – quick thrills for all + instant reaction = fun! fun! fun! xx
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Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.
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Read MoreThere was a time when the wax streamed from our hot flame. There was a time when our fire was a spark, then passion caught flame. There was a time when the flame light burned like hellfire. We burned on like candlelight until we were...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s amazing how you succeed in telling this sad and bittersweet story, using extraordinarily beautiful and heart touching words!
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Read MoreAs our wax burns and drips down - our time is lost. We both need darkness to see our flame - our soul-light. We both need wind to see our flame's flickering persistence. We both need ruins to see our flame illuminate a world - which you...
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Sensational, Daniel! Role reversal at her most punishing! xx