Powerful. I does feel as if we are being swarmed at the moment.

Pressures are always around Damian. This poem solidifies the true meaning of “Big brother is watching” Great job here.

It sure is a bloomin jungle out there isn’t it .. inkredibly well captured if not tamed .. Neville 😎👍

Has anyone figured out how to edit on this site? There’s a change I want to make.

Please go to the dashboard. There is a pen. Click on it and you can edit your work.

Awesome write. Dreams and nightmares are our warped realities.

Yes, you understand what I was saying. Thank you.

Exactly, Indie. Thank you.

Love this entreaty poem. Indeed we seek a way out of the darkness and it often helps to have a helping hand from someone we can trust. Truly a beautiful nocturne poem that resonated in the chambers of my soul.

John

Love the ending of this, and I love the succinct texture. You add depth as you go until the whole piece becomes a metaphorical journey. I like where you take this.