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Read MoreLike opening a bottle of wine and letting it breathe aged from the tempest corpse a heady scent of decay in the carrion jar of our hollowed cathedral with a lingering caress of your divine worn grace mimicking the...
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Thank you Fia, for reading and commenting.
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
he knows the sound of my breath
as it catches
hovering over his words
like a hummingbird
imbibing
on the intoxicating nectar
of his expression4 Comments-
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It is special when someone Knows and Sees you.
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Truly 😊
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Beautiful: short, simple, and beautiful. HJx
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Thank you 😊
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Willow wrote a new post
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Read Morehe knows the sound of my breath as it catches hovering over his words like a hummingbird imbibing on the intoxicating nectar of his expression
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This tells the reader what you mean but with finesse. Love it
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Thank you 😊 It was stupid o’clock in the morning so it’s short, but it says what’s important to me
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For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This one had a lot to say with just a few words. I just went with what I felt. Thank you, my friend 😊
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Atticus Abbey and
Adelphina are now friends
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That beginning gives life to this poem even though you bring attention to death. I like the turn in position